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My Life in the Eyes of my Songs
This is where I will give you glances into my life through songs I write. No the're not good, and No I can't sing. If you really like them that much, I could sell you them, otherwise just read. I will warn you now, I have a very twisted mind.
well this one iis about Josh. it's sounds a bit country but it's still mehish. I think I could of made a stronger effort.


You think that you were there,
just to listen, oh
you did so much more.
you were there you beleived it
that's all I really needed
was a freind
as great as you.

You saved my life
more times than you can count,
you don't even know how many it's been.
Suicide, would be my end,
if it weren't for you
but since you were there,
you were my guiding light,
my lifeline.
my sole support.

-chorus-
Without you I'm souless
without you I'm faithless
Without you I'm clueless
Without you I know I'm lost
Without you I'm truthless
without you I'd need it
Without you I'm fearful
be my life, guide my light

-guitar bridge-
~on top of bridge~
oh,
oh yeah.
yeah.
yeah,
oh!
yeah!

-chorus-
Without you I'm souless
without you I'm faithless
Without you I'm clueless
Without you I know I'm lost
Without you I'm truthless
without you I'd need it
Without you I'm fearful
be my life, guide my light

You're my hero,
my superman.
I admire you, and stare at you,
wondering, why so much you care.
about me, do you feel the way I do?
I doubt it, but you're there, you really care,
you don't pretend,
and you save my life day to day!

-chorus-
Without you I'm souless
without you I'm faithless
Without you I'm clueless
Without you I know I'm lost
Without you I'm truthless
without you I'd need it
Without you I'm fearful
be my life, guide my light

~much quieter~
Without you I'm souless
without you I'm faithless
Without you I'm clueless
I know I'm lost
~regular chorus~
Without you I'm truthless
without you I'd need it
Without you I'm fearful
be my life, guide my light

without you..
Oh.
yeah
it's true,
that way i feel about you
I know I'm lost,
Be my life, guide my light.






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AmbitiousMurphy
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 25, 2007 @ 05:50pm
I just want to give you some constructive critisism k. If you could just put more different words into your song it would be fantastic. Try not to repeat so much. You obviously like your "oh" and "yeah" s in your songs razz I thinks it great that you have a friend that cares that much and you feel like you have *at least* one "true" friend. To be honest I've never really had that... Anyways Good song and ta ta for now!

heart ~Gin


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