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POEM: Never Yours
(by b4k4-chan - and yes, it's a lame title. So sue me.)

I’ve grown…
In the end you said that’s what we’re here for
I remember your words as if you were here
Still speaking softly into my ear

It’s a painful memory to bear
Your scarred hands, unable to hold onto me
I watched the us we once had slip away
Now it’s nothing more but a sacred dream

Of all the things I wanted to say to you
I have only said the least important things
How can you face me now?
I’ve never even really looked at you at all

I’ve grown…
You said nothing matters in the end after all
But your sacred hands that held onto me once
Will hold onto me forever in my dream

Tell me, yell to me
It was never meant to be
Hit me, scream to me
Tell me I was just part of your plan

I’ve grown but I can’t remember if you hated me
Tell me I was never yours...






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mimiciousness~
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 27, 2007 @ 03:44pm
It's pretty. I know the emotion of growing apart, feeling you have grown the most - with friendship though, not love. It flows - as some call it - which is good ^ ^ It's nice to read.
Just one thing: Second stanza third line. "the" sounds a little akward there. A typo?

<3


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