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EVERYTHING AND A BAG O' CHIPS!!^^
Prologue (for my book rough draft)
Four hooded figures stealthily ran through a maze belonging to a evil being called Gabe. Pounding behind them, with sleek red fur and a deep lust for blood in his eye's, A demon wolf ran towards the hooded figures trying to stop them. Water from a river rushed into his path trying to stop him but he jumped over it. They obviously didn't want to hurt him. Wind, Rushed through his ears making it hard to hear in one last desperate attempt he launched forward. Grabbing one of the cloaks billowing from the figures he ripped at it only to be left behind.
"kirrenna!" the wolf huffed to the figures slowly disapeering. A figure stopped and looked back pulling her hood down showng golden hair and pale blue eyes.
"Peter." she began, but the wolf was quickly approaching a couple feet away from her, he turned into a man with blood red hair and blodd red eyes standing six feet tall he hovered over the woman named kirrenna.
"I'm sorry but i must do what I'm doing" she said to him looking straight in his eyes. He let out a growl of frustration.
"Gabe will not forgive you of your betrayal you and the others must come back, or face his wrath!". he screamed at her.
"We can't go back now its too late we have already left, you shoul come with us leave Gabe and all this messed up nonsense" she looked at him with deep blue eyes, searching him for an answer. The man named peter shook his head and looked at his hands as if they held the answer to everything.
"why not?" she asked him in a whisper.
"Stay here with me" he stepped forward and took hold of her hand and held it in his. She pulled away not looking at his hurt face.
"NONE OF US ARE STAYING HERE!" she fought to keep her temper.
"you can leave now, with me or stay here and suffer your immortal life" she stepped back and began to walk away.
"Kirrenna!" he yelled chraging at her, thorns grabbed him piercing him every where they touched him making him scream in pain and misery. She looked at him as the thorns brought him to her "I'm sorry peter but i guess we are not meant for each other" the thorns grew a crimson rose under her finger tips, she plucked it from the thorns and placed it in his hand ticking out of the thorns. Tears streaming down his face either from sadness or pain she couldnt tell. "Don't forget me peter" she leaned forward to kiss him.....



Chapter 1 is in the making mrgreen tell me what you think, btw thisa is supposed to be a dream






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SlipperyFrog
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 11, 2007 @ 03:18am
It's pretty good, but just a little too fast paced.


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 11, 2007 @ 03:40am
yes thanks i need to know where and ohhh wow i just noticed i only have one paragraph sweatdrop ok i'll write better at the library tomorrow cool



~stormie~rae~
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A Bi-Polar Bear
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 15, 2007 @ 09:49pm
actually thats good enough seeing as it is a dream


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