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My Hidden emotions
As she lay silently,
her last word escapes her delicate lips,
her heart beat stops,
and her body turns pale,
they feared she would leave them,
because she lay alone,
in the dark and cold,
of the shadows of sorrow,
they forgive her not,
for what pain she has caused,
even though it was not her fault,
she was born innocent,
and that come to be,
the way she would die,






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Shadowmut
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commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 10:07pm
Good but a little sad..


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 05, 2007 @ 10:12pm
I write sad stuff and do you think their's anything I could do to make it better????



stephcooleo458
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