plz tell me what u think.. don't b afraid 2 tell me if u hate them!! i need the critisism!!
BEHIND GLASS
SHE IS KEPT BEHIND GLASS
"IT'S FOR YOUR OWN GOOD" THEY SAY
BUT SHE KNOWS THE REAL REASON
FEAR
THEY HAVE SEEN WHAT SHE CAN DO
SHE STANDS WTH HANDS ON GLASS
WAITING
THE OTHERS ARE COMING FOR HER
COMING TO SET HER FREE
UNTIL THEN SHE STANDS IN HER COLD PRISON
BEHIND GLASS
sunlight
the sun is coming up
he must hide
if he does not he will end up like her
a charcoal figure
lost in darkness
PREY
MORNING IS COMING
SHE HAS TO FEED SOON
A MOVEMENT IN THE DARKNESS
PREY
SHE IS ALWAYS HUNGRY
MOVING QUEITLY SHE STALKS HER PREY
AND THEN AS SHE ROUNDS THE CORNER
SHE ATTACKS
HER PREY SCREAMS IN THE NIGHT
NEVER TO BE SEEN AGAIN
there will b other poems in later entries...
 XxImperfect_PerfectionxX · Sat Jan 27, 2007 @ 02:10am · 6 Comments |
