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~*Hexed*~
Abandoned
Abandoned


Betrayed, terrified, lost, and alone
These words define my insignificant tone
I have no one who cares or understands
They just left me in the darkness to cry
They never cared, they never listened
even though the pain in my eyes glistned
I wanted to feel noticed and recognized
for who i am, but they never realized
The hatred inside me grew,
tearing my heart out
driving me crazy, making me shout
Sadistically, it tempts me
to walk infront of a speeding car
pulling me away from life
luring me away from everything I despise
I wonder who would come,
If I lay bleeding on the ground,
I ponder on who would care,
as I dream my last wish of peace I never found






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xXMercilessCultXx
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commentCommented on: Tue Dec 19, 2006 @ 10:43pm
very nice!!! i love it angel!!!


commentCommented on: Thu Dec 21, 2006 @ 02:51am
very deep but very nice ^_^



chaz3
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Xxfate fell shortxX
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 24, 2007 @ 12:21pm
in the second line, i think instead of life, u should have tone. it would keep more ppl reading. buuut.... thts just my opinion ^.^ happy days dear.


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 04, 2007 @ 04:49am
eek



5000 Lost Souls
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fear.my.dorkiness
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commentCommented on: Thu Feb 15, 2007 @ 02:44pm
Very nice surprised heart
Keep it up sis xd
.::Random person xB::.


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 21, 2007 @ 05:04am
wooooow, this one's your best so far



theendlessroadahead
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_-[ ARMAGEDDON ]-_
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 24, 2007 @ 01:39am
touching


commentCommented on: Mon Apr 16, 2007 @ 10:55pm
"wow thats good" if a had to grade this it would get a 10. its really good



Wings_Of_Pain
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NatElias
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commentCommented on: Fri May 11, 2007 @ 04:12am
Quite good, I'd say.


commentCommented on: Sat May 12, 2007 @ 06:20am
how come i saw this in google..xD

akward hmm maybe a coincindance



X a n c h i i
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