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A new story i started
yes i know it sucks. maybe whoever sees this can help me with my writing skills. Sorry if i use foul language and put mental pics in ur head. =p just comment me to stop using either one.
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Azure Van Diez is a normal girl who isn't so normal. She was moody and tough at the same time. You can never tell what she thinks and most of all. She seems to attract weird people -__-;; you'll see what i mean. And Yulie Severi basically she's the main character too so you'll see the story through her eyes. The setting will be mostly outside of school or in a class. The two girls are freshmen at Crimson High<have no clue if thats a real school or not but whatever> lets see how their freshmen year goes. ;3
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It's just like any normal, boring day. Yulie Severi was sitting at her desk drawing while her Math Teacher went on about Distributive propertives.

Thank goodness this is the last block of the day Yulia thought.

Yulie keeped on drawing.

WAP! The Math Teacher slammed her ruler against Yulie desk which caused her to jump out of her seat a little bit.

"Yuliae Severi!! You and your drawings again! See me after class" then the teacher turned and walked to the board.

Yulie stuck her tongue out then felt a ball of paper hit her head and fall to the floor.
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OMGOSH I GTG XDDD

and i'm editing wow!!

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Yulie bent down and picked it up.

oh its just from azure

Note:

OMGOSH POOR U!! AFTER CLASS WITH HER IS LIKE WATCHING YOUR GRANDPARENTS DOING IT!!!!



Yulie's reply:

........eeeeewwww!

The bell rang and Yulie waited till everyone left except the teacher.

"Yulie what am i going to do with you?!? You are always busy with your your....diddledadidly drawings!!!" the teacher slammed her hand on her desk and then continued "You should be paying attention in class and studying!!!"

jeez doesn't she have someone better to bug... stare

Yulia spotted someone foreign walking around in the hallway and was destracted by it.


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ooh foreigner XDDD i'll continue if this story actually sounds good to you all






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ScifiSOS
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 06, 2007 @ 02:28am
i know i suxs at this stuff =[ this is just outta boredem tho and i need to get better at writing for freshman comp class


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