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Eternity (poem)
carefully watching you everyday,
moving around in an heavinly way,
never woring about your life,
always happy in every strike,
crying rain cold as dust,
smiling sun bright as lust,
east is setting west is rising,
as in i can tell your always smiling,
night is cold as watery ice,
hair seems as black as night,
laughing at every sight,
brings smiles to my eyes,
seeing you happy alot means
eternity to me within your heart.
(sorry for miss spelling alot of words in this poem but i wrote it when i was a freshman in high school and now i am a senior so yeah sorry )






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Black Dead Wolf
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commentCommented on: Fri Jun 15, 2007 @ 05:32pm
It doesnt matter if the words are misspelled the poem is good anyway..


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