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Hey peeps! I guess I kinda like to write poems, so there should be a few in here, including my favorite one, but i can't think of a name for that one!
HEY PEEPS!!! read this poem

Cause when push comes to shove,
You taste what you're made of
You might bend 'till you break
Cause it's all you can take
On your knees you look up,
Decide you've had enough
You get mad you get strong,
Wipe your hands shake it off
Then you stand prepared to fight,
But your opponent takes the first bite
You swing and miss,
But the next is a direct hit
Now she's on the ground,
You know you've got her
You don't give in cause you know you're better
But then you look into her eyes
And stop and realize
That from the start to the end,
You've been fighting your best friend.


~Ayame_Dolphin_16

I wrote this poem while staying at a haunted ranch with some friends, it still needs a title and any suggestions are greatly appreciated






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PandaFairy
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commentCommented on: Thu Nov 23, 2006 @ 06:02am
i luff it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 25, 2006 @ 05:13am
You could title it Betrayed...



Xx_Punk_Rocker13_xX
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Azarhael Morganti
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 26, 2007 @ 04:48am
I love poetry and this one has a unique style! I love it!

Hmm... Title?

How about "Friends Till the End" though that gives it away at the beginning...
This one is a bit comical but "Catfight"?
Hmm.... "Overcome"?

I'm usually pretty good about titles but yours is stumping me!

I really love this poem though! Very nice!


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