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xp My first story.

This one is called Left out.

Once there was a girl name Lina. She went to a catholic school but everyone thought she was way to hipher so they tried their best to stay away and make her feel unwelcomed. Lina tried her best not to cry in class so she asked to go to the bathroom now and then to cry. In her class no one was her friend except Mrs.Lanna, the teacher witch was too busy to answer Lina most of times. One day Lina asked to go to the bathroom again to cry. Lina was in 6th grade by the way. Lina was crying in the bathroom until she heard a toilet flush she tried to dry up her tears and make no sounds so the person that flushed the toilet didn't ask her anything. But the tears kept on pouring out. She could NOT be quiet she kept on weeping and weeping. Then the person that flushed the toilet came out. She saw Lina crying.She went up to Lina.

"What's wrong?"She asked. Lina kept on weeping.

"Come on tell me..."said the person. Lina put her face up and looked at the tall person's face. Lina had tears all over her face, down her cheek and stuffed in her eyes. Lina looked down again and wiped the tears away all that she could and backed away from the tall person.

"L-leave me alone..." said lina tearing up again.

"What's wrong?"asked the person, "why are you crying?"

"N-n-no one likes me so they exclude me and make me feel horrible!!!"

"It's ok!"said the person getting closer to Lina. "I will be your friend!"

Lina could not believe it but when she looked up she saw it was a 9th grade Teen.

"It's ok," said the person bending down. "I will make sure no one picks on you. Don't Worry! By the way I am Catie"

Lina started to sniffle.

"THANK YOU! THANK YOU!" Said Lina hugging on Catie.

As the days passed no one ever did pick on Lina ever again.Catie and Lina had been friends forever since then. Lina and Catie called each other once or more a week and continued being friends. And Lina and Catie stayed friends for almost the rest of thier life until Catie passed away and they both went to heaven.

The End





Mina_Shirogane
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    XxTeh_P3D0_BunBunzxX
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    commentCommented on: Fri May 16, 2008 @ 06:15pm
    aww sweet story.^^


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