The Witches of the Forbidden Forest
CHAPTER 1: The Secret
There was a knocking sound on the door of Zuna's cabin door. Her cabin was located deep inside the forbidden forest. Zuna had a secret, a secret that nobody knew until now. She was a witch, the most talented witch in the world. She went to witch college when she was 18 years old. Now she was 28, and nobody knew of her at all, only her friend that she met in high school. Zuna went and opened her door. "Yuki... How are you?" "I'm well, found Luna wondering in the woods." Yuki told Zuna. Luna was Zuna's fox, she was transformed into a fox when she dissobeyed the future queen back in 1620. Luna was a fox that was imprisoned forever in a fox form that can't ever die, she was trapped forever. " Oh you did! That's great. Poor thing, she needed a little time to go and spend some time with Rin." Zuna said wretchedly. If you're wondering who Rin is, he is just like Luna, but only he had been imprisoned in 1589. "poor poor things." Yuki had said.
"AVIATICE" Zuna dissapeared followed by Yuki a few seconds later. "where did you see her?" Zuna asked Yuki. " i saw her over there by that big oak tree." There in the blink of an eye, they saw a white figure followed by a flying black figure. Rin was a crow, and luna was a white fox that blended into the snow perfectly, but in this case she was so easy to find. "ABREATICE" Zuna screamed and Luna froze and so did rin. Rin fell from the sky and gently landed in Yuki's hands. Zuna walked twardes Luna. " Luna, Time to come home." zuna said with skepticism. NO I WON'T. I HATE BEING INCARCERATED! " TO..BAD! I'll let you go and see Rin and Yuki tomorrow." FINE!
COME BACK IN A COUPLE OF DAYS FOR CHAPTER 2!
CHAPTER 1: The Secret
There was a knocking sound on the door of Zuna's cabin door. Her cabin was located deep inside the forbidden forest. Zuna had a secret, a secret that nobody knew until now. She was a witch, the most talented witch in the world. She went to witch college when she was 18 years old. Now she was 28, and nobody knew of her at all, only her friend that she met in high school. Zuna went and opened her door. "Yuki... How are you?" "I'm well, found Luna wondering in the woods." Yuki told Zuna. Luna was Zuna's fox, she was transformed into a fox when she dissobeyed the future queen back in 1620. Luna was a fox that was imprisoned forever in a fox form that can't ever die, she was trapped forever. " Oh you did! That's great. Poor thing, she needed a little time to go and spend some time with Rin." Zuna said wretchedly. If you're wondering who Rin is, he is just like Luna, but only he had been imprisoned in 1589. "poor poor things." Yuki had said.
"AVIATICE" Zuna dissapeared followed by Yuki a few seconds later. "where did you see her?" Zuna asked Yuki. " i saw her over there by that big oak tree." There in the blink of an eye, they saw a white figure followed by a flying black figure. Rin was a crow, and luna was a white fox that blended into the snow perfectly, but in this case she was so easy to find. "ABREATICE" Zuna screamed and Luna froze and so did rin. Rin fell from the sky and gently landed in Yuki's hands. Zuna walked twardes Luna. " Luna, Time to come home." zuna said with skepticism. NO I WON'T. I HATE BEING INCARCERATED! " TO..BAD! I'll let you go and see Rin and Yuki tomorrow." FINE!
COME BACK IN A COUPLE OF DAYS FOR CHAPTER 2!
Chapter 2: The Journey (dedicated to dialog)
Zuna and Luna were walking back to the cabin when rin came from the trees out of no where. "My goodness Rin! What are you doing here?" to see Luna "Well, I'm sorry you can't see her right now, we have to get back to the cabin." Fine! i'll see her tomorrow. As Rin was flying away he muttered to himself: What made her so tetchy? " IHEARD THAT!" Zuna shouted back to Rin
Why can't i see Rin? "because i need to change you back. You want to be changed back don't you?" you KNOW i do, but why can't you change Rin too? "because he isn't mine, it's Yuki's choice if she wants to change him back, and she'll have to do it herself." ok, ok. Transform me back, then i'll go and get Rin, and talk to Yuki and bring Rin back here, and you can transform him back here. "NO Luna, you can't." WHY - NOT?! "because if one of the under-cover animals see you coming back with Rin here, and they find out that you are staying with me, they'll transport back to 1620 and tell the Diminion, and they will come back here and kill me, since i am a witch." Can't you transport both of us to Yuki's and change both of us back, and then when i get my powers back- Luna then got cut off by Zuna and said " IT'S NOT THAT SIMPLE LUNA!" SO...back to what i was saying, when i get my powers back, i'll transport me and Rin somewhere in the forest, close to you and yuki, then we'll build a cabin, and all 4 of us will put an enchantment spell at least 80 acres around all three cabins on EVERY side, left, right, back, front, top you name it. "Fine what ever, but i nee the right ingredent to complete the potion." whatever it is, I'll get it for you, i can get anything! "Luna, it's too hard to get, to hard for you even." i doubt that! what is it? "It's just so risky Luna, i don't want you to..." Too bad! Tell me what it is! " its the hair....the hair of..."
ZUNA! WHAT IS IT? " its the hair of the queen that transformed you." Zuna said so fast that she almost didn't understand what she said. You're right...for the first time since you found me, you're right. "thats why i have to go alone..." Zuna said apprehensively with a sad face. NO! not without me! " i'm sorry luna, but its too risky for you!" i know, but i want you to be careful. "I'll set out november 1st at 1:00am." After that Zuna went to bed without a word, and thinking about how she was going to endure this journey, and what will happen to her if she was cought by the Diminion and killed! The next day Zuna went to Yuki's cabin and they talked about her long journey, and they agreed that Zuna will go on november 1st to 1620, then come back and Yuki go to 1589 to get the queen's hair that transformed him.
COME BACK TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS IN A COUPLE OF DAYS FOR CHAPTER 3!
Chapter 3: Part 1 of the Long Journey
SORRY MY BRAIN IS DOWN RIGHT NOW....WHEN IT GETS IT'S THINKING ABILITY BACK THEN I'LL WRITE THIS CHAPTER
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Good idea for a story.
One thing, try for some variety when using transitions.
Like instead of Zuna, zuna, zuna.
Make it start with something else.
3nodding
I can't wait to read more.