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Days At Whirlwind High
Little pieces of a sci fi story to be known.
Slowly making her way throgh a cloud of dust, Mika is met by a blaring assistant. Her mind is set as she channels out all other noises. She sighs knowing that there is no way brush them off. Sighing, Mika tucks her lips into her mouth. Her head hangs in a sort of hypnotic nod as she struggles to stay awake. She tugs on her skirt as she prepares to perform. Tension rises as her hearing begins to comeback. Mika is tugged at for a kiss of makeup, she coughs from the rose littered dust. Her hair is flicked back one is raptured by her curled lips.
"Alright, it's showtime!" Mika confirms herself as the clicking of her hills is played to crowd. Her stomach churns, she gulps a mouthful of air. The crowd roars, her eyes widen to the jungle they call a concert. The music begins to roll a melody, as Mika centers herself along the buffed wood. She draws a breath and lets out a soothing line,
"Daraka ga_______sasayaku yo, Kasuka na koe__de!" her voice is powerful yet soothing. Mika continues," Kirameku___ hoshi no kanata, Itsuka ki__ita yakusoku,"
She hesitates for a moment releasing a sparkling tower. Mika's voice shoots up to hit an ah.Her lips in sync with the music. Then all of a sudden she is blinded by a vision. Mika tries to keep going but her voice staggers. She is stunned as she tries to achieve a decent note. The vision comes back it is blurred but she can decipher the words 'Hello, i've been waiting for you'. Her knees buckle and she slumps to the ground. The crowd spits a remark of shock and awe.Crewmembers rush to her body, trying to get her to consciouseness.Mika arrives at the local hospital. Her breaths are short and unrythmic. She fades in and out lights.black.lights.black.lights. silence... Mika's eyes are snapped softly shut. She is serene as she finds her manager in the hallway discussing some matter with the doctor. The look of disappointment is not far behind.Mika ponders on the thought of her singing career would be over. The small framed manager enters the room," You were suffering from fatigue Mika, and the doctor wants you to take it easy for a while." Mika is almost expressionless as these words poisoned her outlook.
"I signed you up for a school near here, you'll be enrolled there as of Monday," Mika is suprised by the thought of going back to school since she has been touring since she was thirteen.
"Well if I'm going back to back to school, I would like to know which one?"she questioned. She climbed up the back railing to a stiff position.
" Your registration says Whirlwind High," the manager says blandly. Mika agrees to go but is unaware of this schools paranormal qualities.
To be continued......... 4laugh





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    commentCommented on: Thu Oct 19, 2006 @ 04:48am
    It's good, I like the idea. But you did the same thing as last time. D: ALot of the sentences start with "she" or "her" and it's distracting. There are some grammatical errors and typos, but otherwise it's okay. I'm guessing all these kids meet eventually?


    commentCommented on: Mon Nov 06, 2006 @ 08:29pm
    its a cool story... i will have to read the next chapter... hangon... mrgreen



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