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This is where I post my poems for everyone to read. Please feel free to comment on them. I like posting random tidbits of everyday life as well!
Fallen
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Dreams of you left me alone.
feelings drown out the pain
mistakes needed to be atoned.

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Tears cascade down soft skin.
heart broken by callousness
being loved by you never again.

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Chocolate brown eyes wondering.
little hands grasping at skirt
not knowing and always pondering.

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Tall body walking slowly away.
leaving those who love you alone
little hearts and minds pray.

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Helplessness is what we feel.
time slips by without knowledge
in time these hearts will heal.

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Summer Rayne
Oct. 14, 2006
8:30pm






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-King Johan-
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 06:25am
I Love it!!!!

I would like to see more of your works sis!! >.<


whee whee whee


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 10:17am
Nice i love it 4laugh



Kyaluu
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shade_n_rose
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 02:42pm
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwws baby you didagreat job i loveyou fallen forever in our love heart burning_eyes ninja ninja heart heart heart heart heart


commentCommented on: Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 03:57pm
I really enjoyed that, It was good. Keep up the good work.



wildfiremf
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wolfladie
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 15, 2006 @ 04:14pm
Summer that was great. Thanks for sending it to me. sweatdrop


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 16, 2006 @ 12:33pm
purdy heart



MidnightShadow7
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Starvynne
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commentCommented on: Mon Oct 16, 2006 @ 05:57pm
Oh darling, this is rather good. Let me know when you post more!!! mrgreen


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