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My tears got dry... I don’t know why I am crying today… Today was mother’s birthday, right? …I-It... It hurts… It really hurts… You told me is fine to cry once in a while, but… I am your big brother… If I cry… Which hope I have? Remembering mom’s last days… makes me feel useless… We found her fainted… On the kitchen floor, right? You were scared… I ran out for help… Mom was dying! Remember when mom closed her eyes? When she asked me to make her flowers for her grave… When her breathing stopped and you and I started crying… Standing in front of her grave… Al… Let’s revive mom… Why? What have we done? Mom? She isn’t mom! Al? Al! Alphonse?! No! This can’t be happening! I am such a bad brother… Your stupid brother… Her stupid son… We grew up… I was fifteen, you fourteen. We were looking for the philosopher’s stone. The philosopher’s stone… Our damn excuse for our non-sense sin! You saw my tears… Al, I am Ok, don’t worry. I faked a smile, but you know I was lying. You hugged me… It’s my fault you can’t feel my warm… I was sure you were crying too… Even though you have an armor as body, you were crying with me… Alphonse, big brother is here… I will recover your body… I will recover mom… I will recover your warm smile… Even if I failed as a human… I won’t fail you as a brother. I won’t fail her as a son. I will bring that old days back! Those happy days back! Yet, I am still crying… Now… We aren’t together any more… I am alone… in other place rather home… Still with my metal limbs, Still without mom, Still without you… But you have recovered your body, remember? Thanks your kindness… Thanks our bond… Thanks my sacrifice… That makes me happy. Promise we will be together again, Al. With mom, With dad, As a happy family… Promise. Just wait till my tears get dry… Atte: Edward Elric

Posted by: Ling Yao FA Tue Oct 03, 2006 @ 06:31am

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Commented on: Tue Oct 03, 2006 @ 09:30pm


	sad poor edwad hugs u

Commented on: Sun Oct 08, 2006 @ 05:52pm


	Whhhaaa! Edo-Kun. hug

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Commented on: Wed Oct 11, 2006 @ 01:59am


	Wow, poor guy cry I like how you get to be inside the character biggrin Good job.

Commented on: Sun Nov 12, 2006 @ 06:01am


	love it nice job made me hold back some tears grt job

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Commented on: Sun Feb 18, 2007 @ 10:26pm


	wow nice job heart

Commented on: Mon Apr 09, 2007 @ 12:42am


	it's beautifull cry cry

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Commented on: Thu Apr 19, 2007 @ 10:59pm


	crying crying crying crying crying crying crying e..edward-kun....>< omg..this is so..so deep, and excellent. i luv da way this was made. great job! 3nodding

Commented on: Sun May 13, 2007 @ 11:23pm


	Ed ...Thats just sad

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Commented on: Tue May 22, 2007 @ 05:41am


	that was a wonderful poem,your mother would be proud......

Commented on: Mon Jun 04, 2007 @ 06:44pm


	.. Edward, you made me sad.. hugs So sad that I have to wear classes, that people can't see my tears..

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Commented on: Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 02:56am


	By my blade, you will die... *Ema*: SENTIMENTAL! You know it ain't as bad as it seems. Now stop crying, you're gonna make me look bad. Then why are you crying, too? By my word, thy doom in nigh.

Commented on: Sun Jun 24, 2007 @ 08:53pm


	trust me i know the pain of remembering those days... you wouldn't even dare to write the pain to describe those days... i've been living it for a long time now...

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