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Chapter II: The Struggle
Chapter II: The Struggle ~Too Disdained to Sacrifice Sanctity~

Note: This poem got rave reviews from everyone who has read it in the past. Well, right after they found out what the hell it means, lmao. You'll be able to read that after you read this poem.

All the while living in this depressive century
Hung by the wrists with rusty nails
Leaning against moldy wood looking to the sky
"Stop laying your eyes on me"... filled with judgement
Why-oh-why had it to be me to take the heat
The sacrificed one to feel the pain of vengeance
Vengeance of the one called "Mr. Satan"


The angels smile out of spite
God laughs violently at me... how I would like to kill...
|Escape is all too eminate|


All the while existing on this depressive land
Surrounding by those who are mind-controlled terrorists
Spouting out prayers and testimonals of the old
"Stop putting holy water on me"... it burns right through
******** martyrs --- get away from and leave me alone
The smited one to feel the wrath of vengeance
Vengeance of the one called "Mr. Satan"


The angels still smile out of spite
God still laughs violently at me... how I must kill...
|Escape is all just too eminate|


Where the ******** are you at? *Satan*
Who the ******** you think is the flawed one? *Satan*
I aleady know you know of the one whom you are toying with *Satan*
I can feel your eyes --- detesting the very purpose of me *Satan*
I the subjected pawn of your own turmoil and ego
Kill your hatred of me and follow the path of sanctity...

All the while living in this depressive century
Beaten --- beaten again with the rhinestone-studded leather of a belt
Don't you dare lash out your frustrations on me
Why-oh-why had it to be me to take the heat
Kill your hatred of me and follow the path of sanctity...
Persecution ordered by Satan and carried out by God
Suppressing their next savior that of kin

† Stop shunning... embrace me! †

Where the ******** are you at? *Satan*
Who the ******** you think is the flawed one? *Satan*
I aleady know you know of the one whom you are toying with *Satan*
I can feel your eyes --- detesting the very purpose of me *Satan*
Now your pawn ceases to exist with eyes glowing blood crimson
If only you could kill your hatred of me and follow the path of sanctity...

Merging with the Gaia~summoned by a desperate plea
Binded with the type of power of God x that of 40
The cross crumbles to pieces turning to something resembling malice
I let it all go free... the power you will now believe
Your holy†demonic minions disolved to nothing
The atmosphere rains unearthly tears which is beautiful to see
Behold the might of a purity not having been held with soiled hands


The angels hide their tainted wings
God shivers violently in fear... now I will be able to kill...


Mr. Satan what are you thinking?
I now can't make the link to the passageway to your mind
Hide as you may... for you are true egotistical heavenly garbage...
...to pull your own brother into commiting sin against your next of kin!

I'll find you... "Where-oh-where do you hide...?"



Note: Here is the link to the notes to the poem. I can't write it all down here because it's a lengthy explaination burning_eyes So long that it is its own book. So YOU HAVE BEEN FOREWARNED! Also, don't read any of the retarded comments I got. The people are all dramallama if you know what I mean...har har har...!

[link!]
http://miyavi-type.livejournal.com/34073.html#cutid1






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Volg
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commentCommented on: Sun Oct 01, 2006 @ 10:20pm
holy crap, that was awesome!
It's now official that everyone of my friends can either draw or write or both really good, while I have no talent at anything artistic, oooh woe is me!

I couldn't get to your LJ, it said it was protected post sad


commentCommented on: Mon Oct 02, 2006 @ 02:28am
Crappers! I'm so sorry >_< but now it works. I changed it to a public post >_>



Stage Deus-EX-Machina Now
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ARThomas
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commentCommented on: Tue Oct 03, 2006 @ 05:43pm
You callin' me a dramallama !?! XD

Like I've said before in your LJ, this poem is so ******** deep!! It's been a while since I read this poem, it's still wonderful! Great job, you deserve some gold!


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