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A bit of frustration and self doubt in pixels:

With all the traces of my insanity and the confusion of my heart,
I sometimes wonder if I'll ever acomplish anything in life.
I believe I can write a story that tells a thousand truths that makes you laugh and think at the same time;
Will you read it?
I know I can talk about love and life for a thousand hours;
Will you listen?
I know I can hear a thousand emotions in a single heartbeat;
will you share your heart with me?
I know I'm afraid to trust a thousand strangers;
Will you help me trust a friend?

I want to know what sort of person I can be, but I'm afraid...
I can be a thousand things...
Which path will you help me chose?






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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 14, 2006 @ 09:38pm
Trust me. Like I trust you.


commentCommented on: Sat Oct 07, 2006 @ 10:27pm
I must say I normally like your work, but this piece of poetry, I am not so fond of. I do like the concept, but I strongly dislike the fact that you are asking people questions like... "which path will you help me choose?" I believe we all need guidance, but you don't need other people's help to choose the path you're going to take. Some desicions we gotta make on our own, and that is one of them. I am not saying the poem sucks, but you know me and how perfect I like poetry to be, haha. Ilu and I missie you. <3



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