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The Yodelray
Where everyone wears lederhosen.
spun out
spun out

i put the cd in, press play, and
the world fades to nothingness
as the drums begin to pound in my veins,
nerves humming to the beat.
physical existence loses its corporeality,
soundwaves forming a new plane
upon which i now stand,
heartbeats indistinguishable
from the ever-present bass.
just let me lose myself
for an hour, a half, a quarter,
drifting away on the guitar melody
as gravity dissolves
for lack of mass to create it.
i'm omniscient, omnipresent, omnipotent;
the shift of a whim, the click of a button
determining the fate of this reality
where everything is finally as it seems
and earth's lies are washed clear
by waves in the ocean of music.
then the jagged rocks of a broken guitar solo
break the tide of the pulsing bass,
and the cymbals crash out of time
as the singer's voice skips a line,
and my truthful oblivion fragments
as the disc spins itself out of the tray.





Egog On Toast
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    spaztaztical
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    commentCommented on: Sat Jun 17, 2006 @ 06:51pm
    I was there when you wrote this mrgreen

    I 'specially like the end.


    commentCommented on: Sat Jun 24, 2006 @ 03:15am
    Into the ring
    Lights are bright
    My ribs are broken
    Blood dripping from my face
    I take a hit to the jaw
    Brain raddles
    every thing goes dark
    Wake up with a gun
    I shoot winner in the face
    last bullet
    Good bye cruel world

    You like it? biggrin mad



    El Dablo~King
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    Egog On Toast
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    commentCommented on: Sun Jun 25, 2006 @ 03:40am
    blunt, but nice.


    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 04, 2006 @ 04:38am
    I remember this poem thingy. it's really ******** awesome. you write really good stuff.



    GerardxWayxMinion
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    Lunar_Vampire_Aurora
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    commentCommented on: Mon Jul 24, 2006 @ 02:20am
    love it


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