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"hey do you think it will end?" I asked.
He smiled looking at the sky.
"How long do you want it to last?" he said with a smile on his face.
I looked over and smiled.
"Forever..." I giggled.

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Everytime I'm with you,
I feel my heart beat faster,
its ment to be please just listen to my heart,
its singing for you,
I cant ingore its song its playing for you and me,
its are song,
each beat is a just song,
everytime Im alone Im a mute lover,
But I can always hear my song,
My hearts only your song,
it shall play even when your not around,
to remind me your mine,
Lets go pearfully,
to the music,
are song will just be for us please just listen.

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^_^ tee hee hee.. I like to write






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[Hyrule]
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commentCommented on: Fri May 12, 2006 @ 01:27pm
I love your work whee *curses self for not being as good as you*


commentCommented on: Sat May 13, 2006 @ 03:26pm
You only get this good if you been through alot of heart breaks and alot of failer. The only reason I write stuff like this like this poem I wish I had the someone that I lost to someone else... but Its ok becuase I am slowly getting out of that place in my mind.

but hey
Rgflame your writeing is really good I dont see why you have to say something like that my writeing is better then yours ... I have a problem staying on topic LOL so its not that good but I am working on makeing a book I will post it chapter by chapter and have little poems inbettewn *winks* see you all latter bye



Chiroo
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[Hyrule]
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commentCommented on: Sat May 13, 2006 @ 05:03pm
Edit: Never mind, I started a new story, 1st chapter already up whee biggrin


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