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my favorite poem this is my favorite poem i rote myself...its stupid and i know so dont pick it to pieces ok.? I once knew a horse he said he knew morse I didnt believe him of course!! He said he worked for the army of Bess when I asked they said yes! This answer hit me full force

Posted by: `Manifest Thu Dec 02, 2004 @ 03:00am

[b:b85e37c006]Captured my Soul.[/b:b85e37c006]

[b:b85e37c006]Caught my Thoughts.[/b:b85e37c006][/align:b85e37c006]

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Commented on: Sun Dec 05, 2004 @ 01:54am


	I won't pick it apart, but I will comment, how's that? I think it's cute, personally. 3nodding

Commented on: Sun Dec 05, 2004 @ 09:43pm


	thank you I wrote it a couple a years ago.

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Commented on: Tue Dec 07, 2004 @ 11:40pm


	cute... Wanna hear one of mine?>>>> Forlorn rose Deep dark shades, A drop of dew, Fading shadows, Blood red hues, Jagged edges, Smooth curves, Not but silence to be heard, Wind whistles tall in one, Deadly thorns may p***k thine thumb, Nothing broken, Nothing torn, In its perfect place, A rose forlorn. That is the one in my siggy picture....

Commented on: Sat Dec 11, 2004 @ 09:38pm


	AWW!! How cute Derek. It's very nice. Now when did you write this... fourth grade? you need to have more recent ones.

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