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dr kittin
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The fascanating and wonderful life of Edward Jones
The fascanating and wonderful life of Edward Jones:

Part One

Edward Jones was an odd sort of fellow
His eyes were blue and his hair was yellow
He walked with a hat and a cane in his hand
And lived in a house that was really quite grand.

And all of the people he saw in a day
would tell you, "He's nice, though rather mundane."
And all of his neighbors thought so as well
All, that is, except Suzy Tell.

Now, Suzy Tell was a sweet little girl
She was, perhaps, the best in the world
She was courtious and graceful right down to the bone
and she live right next door to old Mr. Jones

(work in progress biggrin )





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TheKaylaPup
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comment Commented on: Fri Jun 08, 2012 @ 06:52am
Interesting. Your rhyme scheme starts off great but gets kinda icy at the end there.
~TheKaylaPup

You fised your ryhme scheme. Lovely! Let me know when your done with it! heart

~TheKaylaPup


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