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Just read it. And yes, read all of it. I know most of you will just skim it and forget it. >x[

Once on a yellow piece of paper with green lines
he wrote a poem
And he called it "Chops"
because that was the name of his dog
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and a gold star
And his mother hung it on the kitchen door
and read it to his aunts
That was the year Father Tracy
took all the kids to the zoo
And let them sing on the bus
And his little sister was born
with tiny toenails and no hair
And his mother and father kissed a lot
And the girl around the corner sent him a
Valentine signed with a row of X's
and he had to ask his father what the X's meant
And his father always tucked him in bed at night
And was always there to do it

Once on a piece of white paper with blue lines
he wrote a poem
And he called it "Autumn"
because that was the name of the season
And that's what it was all about
And his teacher gave him an A
and asked him to write more clearly
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because of it's new paint
And the kids told him
that Father Tracy smoked cigars
And left butts on the pews
And sometimes they would burn holes
That was the year his sister got glasses
with thick long lenses and black frames
And the girl around the corner laughed
when he asked her to go see Santa Claus
And the kids told him why
his mother and father kissed a lot
And his father never tucked him in bed at night
And his father got mad
when he cried for him to do it.

Once on a paper torn from his notebook
he wrote a poem
And he called it "Innocence: A Question"
because that was the question about his girl
And that's what it was all about
And his professor gave him an A
and a strange steady look
And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door
because he never showed her
That was the year that Father Tracy died
And he forgot how the end
of the Apostle's Creed went
And he caught his sister
making out on the back porch
And his mother and father never kissed
or even talked
And the girl around the corner
wore too much makeup
That made him cough when he kissed her
but he kissed her anyway
because that was the thing to do
And at three A.M. he tucked himself into bed
his father snoring soundly

That's why on the back of a brown paper bag
he tried another poem
And he called it "Absolutely Nothing"
Because that's what it was really all about
And he gave himself an A
and a slash on each damned wrist
And he hung it on the bathroom door
because this time he didn't think
he could reach the kitchen.






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Zju
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 02, 2006 @ 10:30pm
Favorite poem, ever. cool


commentCommented on: Mon Apr 03, 2006 @ 03:14am
woah, totally deep, i like how the last paragraph was contructed



HalfGhost_3.0
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kotomi--mitsu
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 05, 2006 @ 08:44am
I love it. <33


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 07, 2006 @ 01:55am
Sweetheart, I miss you. ;^; <3



Zju
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varyen
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 13, 2006 @ 08:47am
I love how this poem starts off at childhood, when things seem to be so perfect and wonderful. Then slowly it progresses, things getting worse as it goes along, and the boy realizing nothing can be as perfect as it seemed or seems, filled with doubt, loosing his ignorant bliss. Or perhaps he wasn't ignorant, but with time things just fell apart, because if perfect exists it only does for a short time. Something cannot remain perfect in this world, even if it seems so. Perfect, like the innocence of a child, cant last. That's what this poem said to me. The way I interpret it, it reminds me of the poem "Nothing gold can stay" by Robert Frost. I believe that poem was also about innocence, and how it tends to fade, because it cannot exist in this world of sin for long. As we grow up and are subject to the influences around us, we slowly loose that innocense. I wonder sometimes, if we could somehow remain innocent, if our world and our lives would be paradise. I'm not a christian, but in the bible weren't Adam and Eve innocent before they ate from the tree of knowledge? I suppose that would mean a compromise then, either knowledge or bliss. If you could, would you make the choice to give up everything you know and live completely oblivious to the world around you, as long as you remained happy?

PS: Here's the poem "Nothing Gold Can Stay" by Robert Frost if your unfortunate enough not to know it. I <3 it so much.

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leafs a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay."


commentCommented on: Mon Sep 11, 2006 @ 02:16am
My God...you made me cry with that thing...



JeiceBarton
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