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sweatdrop so, this is what i have for my story so far. ^^ i havnt written this out before, so it isnt that great yet. its just a rough draft. soo..without any further ado, here it is. heart

he gazes out the window at the snow covered land beyond it. the snow falls gently, white against the black night, blanketing everything in white. he slowly runs his finger along the thin piece if glass that is separating him from the outside. he continues to run his finger down it, wishing he could touch the snow, but knowing he cannot. he silently watches it fall, enveloping even the dirtiest things and making them pure and white. he wishes he could lay in the snow and become pure and white, but no matter what the snow covers, eventually it will melt and the things beneath it will become dirty once more. he was alone again that night, the one he loved, tucker was his name, was gone again and because of the snow he wouldn't return until tomorrow.
he turned away from the window, tired of looking at the perfectness it was creating. he drew in a long deep breath that became ragged when he exhaled for it had turned into a cough. his grip on his blanket tightened as he held in the cough, not yet wanting to admit to himself or anyone else that he was sick and had been for quite some time.


soo...i hope that was okay and not too crappy. there will be more tomorrow! xp