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These are just random crappy things that i have written or drawn. Thank you so much if you take the time to look at this!
wink ok, so just as a warning, this little thing here, has nothing to do with my previous post. its just another random thing i wrote awhile ago. i might possibly end up tying it into my previous entry but that is a biiig maybe. sad so anyways, please enjoy this little bit of writing here. surprised




“Shelby!!!!’ he screamed as he chased after her. “don’t do this to me!! Shelby!” her car pulled out of the drive leaving him standing there. He mumbled under his breath and walked back up his long driveway. Wagging there tails his dogs greeted him, but he just shook them off. The dogs knew when they weren’t wanted, and so they wandered off to various places. He sat in his rocking chair, staring out over his vast property. why..? he thought. he hadn’t done anything recently to upset her. I mean sure..he worked a few more hours than normal…but that was to be expected at this time of year and when they didn’t have many employees. he shook his head, to tired to think about it anymore. He stood up. Maybe he could think of the reason in the morning. As he turned to go inside he whistled for the dogs. All came running to his whistle. Sure he shrugged them off sometimes, but he was still the best master that many of them had ever had. He had rescued many of the dogs from abusive homes to just finding them on the street. He walked into his living room, not bothering to turn the light on. He had lived here long enough that he new his way around the house without being able to see. “man I screwed up..” he whispered to himself. “how could I be so stupid as to let our whole relationship fall apart?”






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Winry_Rockbell799
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commentCommented on: Mon Nov 22, 2010 @ 04:02am
lol i love the little part about the dogs, wandering off to various places >/////<
wow this was a really interesting piece, though, capturing this sad moment of their relationship. I actually think it could be a really interesting tie in to the previous entry, or as a separate story it would also be really great! I really love the way you get inside the man's head here! Please post more! Oh, I see there's a second entry, so I'll go see which story that continues! smile And your writing really is very beautifully detailed, that's such a strength of your style, and I love it!


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