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Lost Music Note
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Posted: Fri May 07, 2010 @ 05:57pm

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	Euphoriaaaaa! After a depressing drop, My heart is finally flying. I feel alive again, I'm up top, The clouds are trying, They're trying to rise too, But they can't, or course not, I'm so uplifted in the vast blue, Nothing could compare to it, or so I thought. Suddenly, after this brief euphoria, I fall, Fall lower than the ground, past the earth, Away from everything, away from it all, Redoing the isolation, undoing my birth. Written in 2010

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That was just a dream, that's me in the corner

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Commented on: Sun May 15, 2011 @ 04:48am


	I totally feel like a stalker going through your poems D: I went to the "Friends List" in the journal tab to see if any of my friends on here actually kept one up, and your most recent one was at the top. Anyway, I read that one and was intrigued enough to read all of them up to this point. Just wanted to say you're really really good with poetry. It may sound weird, but this one especially; I can just...like relate to it I guess. I makes a lot of sense to me. I guess cause I've just been having a hard time since September and theres moments of happiness, and then it all comes crashing down. Anyway though, like I said, you're really talented. Keep it up :3

Commented on: Sun May 15, 2011 @ 09:33am


	♪ ♪ ♪ [: Thank you for commenting, most of this poetry is really old actually. I don't write poetry anymore, very often, because I just kinda lost confidence in my writing. However it's comments like this that get me reconsidering... ^.^ Thank you~!! ♪ ♪ ♪

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Commented on: Sun May 15, 2011 @ 03:33pm


	Old or not, it's still really good :3 You're welcome!

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