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brainstorming
In this journal I am planning on writing a story. Or at least the starts of a story. It is open to the public. Though I don't think many would like to read it xD
starting
Lying in bed, staring off into space, I remember that day.
So bright.
Dream like.
So... Wonderful.
Going back I remember thinking about that fight the other day. How silly it was.
I laugh.
pointless.
As I am being called back into the conversation he comes and grabs me from behind,
"Hi there baby girl." he says.
I smile, turn around, and kiss him.
He tells me to grab the keys in his room.
As I walk in I see there
on the bed
are roses, a heart shaped box of chocolates, and a letter.
I remember looking at the letter then grabbing it smiling and read:
"Dear Renee..."
As I read my eyes start to water though my smile doesn't fade.
Finishing the letter it reads: "Forever yours..."
Forever yours? I sit up in my bed remembering that day.
The smiles gone. But the tears stay.
Forever yours I whisper then shake my head.
I agree with that, look at the letter beside me. Though I don't think it means the same it did before....
I lie back down again thinking.
Forever yours..


*Side note: This piece of writing is.. not really a poem. It can be considered one, however its more of a story. Or rather a brainstorm of a story. Something I guess that would happen in a chapter. It is a project I will be working on when the mood strikes. Which will be happening a lot due to the fact that I'm not really doing much these days. Please enjoy, and give ideas as to what kind of story this should be. However a lot of it will be coming from life. Day to day things that you and I do. Thanks again and peace!






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Ichigo Leonharts
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commentCommented on: Sun Aug 14, 2011 @ 03:00am
i almost cried when i read this v.v heart


commentCommented on: Sun Aug 14, 2011 @ 03:05am
Thanks heart



Summerssnowfallxx
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