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Just... random nonsense... venting... blah blah blah.
MANY APOLOGIES to people that have been reading this story..
Sorry, but I have gotten very lazy lately, and decided to discontinue the story for now.

gonk

I apologize to anyone who was enjoying it (that would be surprising, I had a feeling it wouldn't be going anywhere. XD) and I'm currently writing a new story called..........


"Arigato, Mr. Aowa!"




Tis' about a 16 year-old girl named Kitsune who buys a Nectarine from a 16 year-old fruit vendor and forgets to say thank you. (which is arigato in Japanese..... XD)
So, the boy gets hysterically angry and decides to take over all of Japan, then the world.


I know, random, right? It's supposed to be.
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Kitsune has an overprotective mother named Hiigeshi, an adventuresome best friend named Sasuke, (A.K.A "Adventure-san" wink and meets a bunch of other people along the way that help her on her quest to save Japan, and the world, and some............... aren't so helpful.
XD
Her and Sasuke are a very goofy bunch that enjoy shouting random phrases at the sky, telling stories they haven't even HEARD of before in their lives, sucking on lollipops, and letting others "suck on their AWESOMENESS."
Unlike the other story, I have a feeling this one might go somewhere.

Here's a sneak peek:

"AHHHHHH!!!" Kitsune shouted, "MY MOTHER'S BEEN KIDNAPPED!!"
"What?" Sasuke asked with a slight smile.
"Nothin. I just felt like shouting that. Gives you kind of a.... rush of adrenaline, ya know?" Kitsune answered, also with a smile.
"Really?" Sasuke stopped walking and stared at his goofy friend.
"Yeah," Kitsune exclaimed, "it's actually kinda fun. Try it!"
"Alright....... AHHHHHH!!! MY MOTHER'S BEEN KIDNAPPED!!" Sasuke shouted.
"Hey..... you're right," he said, then shouted it again.
Kitsune chuckled, and, as she shouted again, Sasuke joined in.
"AHHHHH!!! OUR MOTHERS HAVE BEEN KIDNAPPED!!!"
They both laughed for a few minutes, staggering down the rocky road, until the ground started to feel....... different. Kitsune and Sasuke stared down at the bumpy gravel they had been traveling on, slowly raising their heads until they gazed upon...................................... a lone highway. Their eyes grew wide.
"Kitsune......?" Sasuke asked.
"Sasuke......?" Kitsune asked.
"Has...this road... always been here....?" Sasuke whispered.
"I..... don't know...." Kistune answered as she kicked a pebble onto the smooth asphalt. Much to their surprise, the pebble rolled a ways, then vanished. They jumped a little, then Kitsune peered her head slightly over the road.
"Ohhhhh!! It's a hill!!" she exclaimed.
Sasuke craned his neck to look, then retracted and gave Kitsune a smug grin.
"I knew that, I was just teasing you," he said matter-of-factly.


Ok, that's it for now.
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I shall type the beginning once I get the............... the beginning of my story, which is in another notebook.
D;

Cya later, hope you like!!!






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Ganjin
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 23, 2010 @ 01:38am
be a pity that the vampire story came to an end User Image ..... but this one be so cute whee ..... thine funny and random characters play to thine nature perfectly User Image ..... was a little confused at their confusion about traveling up a hill for a bit User Image ..... but I assume that is playing to their carefree--don't care or know where we are going--attitude? ..... looks promising twisted


commentCommented on: Sat Jan 23, 2010 @ 03:03am
Hehehe, yeah, they're a really goofy bunch.
XD
They laugh at almost everything they come across.
XD
But thank you!
And I'm sorry about the other story; if you want me to continue typing it, I can.
3nodding



Farfellion Rincrick
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Ganjin
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 23, 2010 @ 09:12pm
nope ninja ... a writer is at their best when they write towards their passion whee ... if this new story is your decision then me supports it wink ...


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