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well this was actualy my first poem Torn hearts torn lives the sorrows of the earth to be heard. But my sorrow is personal apart from the rest only untold dreams can bring about such sufferings. Sharing yet not knowing despairing but hidden, no good can come of this. The love of my heart is for her but she is not the first nor the last.

Posted by: unknownartist Tue Jan 31, 2006 @ 01:03am

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Commented on: Wed Feb 01, 2006 @ 03:50am


	too good......I love your wording and how you mix your feelings....it seems like they come together very naturally which is awesome! I love it! Gimme more!

Commented on: Thu Feb 02, 2006 @ 02:41am


	I'm afraid I don't wright very much (of worth that can be shone to the public) so i'm afraid youl have to wait but I do have one you havent read yet i'll post it soon

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Commented on: Thu Feb 02, 2006 @ 03:44am


	alright cool sounds good. i've writen about 1 poem. xp

Commented on: Sun Feb 05, 2006 @ 10:53pm

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