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beloved lie
He is walking through the walls of this society
Dreaming of a day he would find his sanity
He is Being pushed around by the ones with so much vanity
He is Being pushed back into his own insanity

You will die soon
Is what he has to say
To avoid his heart’s true fate
To shatter into a million pieces
To shatter into a million pictures

Its only being held together by a fragile string
All the pictures held together in a ring
Once more his heart is broken
And now it has shattered

Shards then start to break his skin
A pain deeper than any is what he now is in
he craves to find the ultimate sin
And end this suffering he is now in

But first he want them all to come with
All the ones in the picture shift
To find the ultimate way to kill
To find the ultimate new thrill

So one year in and one year out
he follows his goal through out
Rising status over all his hated ones
Rising status in this much hated society

Punching through the walls that were once there
Not seeing the walls that we’ve once shared
With everyone else nor all the dares
he has rose so high in such a short time

Ah, so powerful he is now
So now he will change every law
All the ones who messed with him are now falling
And now he leaves their bodies rotting

The people are all out in the battle field
So forever they’ll act as his shield
he has forgotten his own death wish
And now he long to control everyone’s dieing wish

he has become the absolute
he has become our god
he now control us all
Forever using his iron rod

Everything he wanted in life is now his
Now he is finally able to really shine
He waited so long in line
But since he now has this its all fine

A happiness he never knew
Is finally upon his new
Self and society he has created
Him alone has redecorated
Ah, how he has longed for this
He has finally found his sanity

But then he realized it
It made him feel like s**t
He says he is a failure
As he lay in this rundown trailer

It has all been one continuous dream
his most beloved lie
So then he broke out into another cry
And to his head rose a gun
And now its time for his soul to run
Bang now his life
Has ended and now hes so happy
For he is now without the strife






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Girl of the Dragons
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 10, 2009 @ 05:36am
kind of depressing. could use some work but your ideas are good. try to keep the same rhyme scheme throughout the poem. also you might want to check your grammar a bit, but otherwise it's very good. you communicate his insanity and loneliness very well. it's a nice use of irony you used at the end when he wakes up from his dream. cool


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