i know the way my last one was written a lil weird but it look to jumbled up ok now into the story
renock telepathy:lefilia are you in the kingdom yet?
lefilia:yes master renock.
renock:excellent do you see the castle yet?
lefilia:how could i not old man.
renock:you do not talk to me that way!!!
lefilia:fine.(she reaches the castle only to be denied access in)
guard:you may not pass!!!
lefilia:why not???
guard:you are a insolent little b***h aren't you????
lefilia:excuse me?!?!!?
guard:you may not enter unless you do somthing for me
lefilia surprised k shoot.
guard:lets just say relieve me of my stress.
(WAIT!!!!!! I KNOW WHAT YOUR THINKING CALM DOWN TRUST ME)
(the two walk in a dark basement)
guard surprised k start.
lefilia surprised k BLAZING VIPER STRIKE!!!!
guard:uhghghh!!!!!
lefilia:this was the only way i knew how to get your armor off now give me that!!!
(she takes the pass from him)
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slasher:hey shika honey you up?
shika:don't forget you said no training today so let them sleep or walkaround the underworld.
slasher:fine i gotta go talk with dragnoc (kiss) bye.
shika surprised k bye.
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crash:hey big bro.
venom:what's up little man?
crash:wana go fishing?
venom:sure but we don't have any bait?
crash:can't rexor help us? (rexor is the demon dog he can smell where small insects are)
venom surprised h yea (whistles)rexor here boy.
rexor:yes?
venom:wana come fishing with us?
rexor:sure
(when they reach the castle gates)
rexor sad whispering)so we are heading to the spot right?
venom:yeah of course.
rexor:great this is gonna be awesome!
venom:well duh it just gonna be me,you, and crash
rexor:umm...venom?
venom:yea?
rexor:where is crash?
venom:well he's---
venom surprised h my god i lost my younger brother i am so dead!!!
rexor:you can say that again you mom will be pissed!
venom:not helping!!!
rexor surprised k you look that way i will this way!!!
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(crash has already met lefilia and became good friends)
crash:your funny you know.
lefilia:thanks i don't get that a lot.
crash:so are you moving here or vacation.
lefilia:moving.
crash:hey my dad can help you he is the king here.
lefilia:wow you would really help me?
crash surprised f course were friends right?
lefilia:yea the best of.
venom:finally i found you hey rexor over here.
rexor:jeez crash you know how much trouble we could have been in?
venom:forget that come on lets go fishing.
(they start walking to find crash still sitting there with that girl)
venom:come on crash!!!!
rexor:yea hurry up!!!
crash:wana go fishing?
lefilia:sure!
renock telepathy:what the ******** hell are you doing?!?!?!
lefilia telepathy:in order for me to kill him i need to fake be his best friend!!!
renock:deception immperesive maybe i was wrong about you lefilia you might bbecome my apprentice!
lefilia:hey guys wait up!
crash:so have you ever fished before?
lefilia:actually no.
venom:well crash will teach you cause i'm not.
rexor sad laughs) very funny venom
lefilia:what's wrong can't crash fish?
rexor:no it's not that he has a temper problem when it comes to fishing.
crash:i do not!
venom:you almost had a bass one time and it snapped you line then you dove in after with your combat knife dad gave you in your mouth.
rexor:that was hilarious it was like fish turrok gills of evil
lefilia:really?
crash:yes what i have a short temper.
rexor surprised k what ever we're here.
venom surprised k you two can go over there and we will go over here.
crash telepathy:what the ******** is with you!!!
venom telepathy:nothing do i look sick to you?
venom telepathy:wait!!!do't answer that.
(crash and lefillia go over to a bridge and venom and rexor are at a swamp-like pier)
crash:so lefilia do you need help with this?
lefillia:uhh...yeah i don't get it.
crash surprised k let me help you!
(crash grabs with rod and lefilia's hands)
crash:see that easy.
(suddenly they bot noticed how they were)
lefilia surprised h umm...thanks for showing me.
crash:no problem.
(lefilia wouldn't look at crash for 3 mins because she was blushing so bad)
crash:finally you make eye contact you fine?
lefilia surprised h yea of course!!!
renock telepathy:my patience grows thin apprentice kill him now!!!
renock telepathy:it's perfect he's away from his brother and that dog also from his mother and father uncle and aunt that dragon and even the four new ppl here KILL HIM NOW!!!!
lefilia:master i can't be that blunt use my eyes for a second.
(renock takes ahold of her eyesight)
renock tele surprised h very well you also know when intelligence great job indeed.
lefilia tele:thank you master renock!
crash:ahhhh!!!!!!!
(crash gets pulled in by a large being)
venom and rexor:here we go again!
lefilia:crash are you ok???
(crash comes up outta the water)
crash:holy ******** s**t what pulled me in?!?!
venom:i don't knwo but becareful next time!!!
(suddenlly a giant sea seperent came outta the water)
sea serpent sad hisses)time to pay with your blood for invading my sancutuary
look for chapter6:new friendships torn
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