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Juan Sad Story, The final fight 2
Ok so this ispart 2 of my 3 part chapter. So enjoy!!!!

With Juan and Walter

“Wh- Wh- Why?” Juan tried to ask.

“Why what?” Asked Walter as he kept moving forward.

“Wh- Wh- Why do you st- still need me?”

“Oh that’s easy! I need you again when the planets a line again!”

“Bu- But that’s not li- like for another mil- million years.”

“Yes but I got an idea.”

“Ugh. Just let me go.”

“Nope! I’ll still need you later.”

“Ughhh. Well were are we going?”

“Oh not now! It’s a surprise!” Said Walter.

“Just let me go!” Said Juan as he tried to get free. But it did nothing.

“Nope! And there’s no way out! You are too weak!”

“Oh shut up!”

“Hahaha! What are you going to do if I don’t? Huh?”

“Uhhh. You are so lucky I have no energy left.”

“Yeah right! Well we are almost there.”

“Were?”

“Oh you’ll see.”

With Shadow, Shawna, John, and Brenden outside

“Hey John do you know where Walter might of taken Juan?” Asked Shadow after walking for 3 minutes.

John still said nothing. He didn’t feel like talking anymore. It hurt to bad after what just happened.

“Oh my god, John snap out of it!” Cried Shadow. He then slapped him across the face.

“I know you didn’t like to hear that Walter was just using you, but you have to give that up!!! I know how you feel! A long time ago someone used my too but I had to let it go! Now you have to do the same!”

“Bu- Bu- Bu-“ Said John.

SLAP!!!

“Hey! Why did you do th-“

SLAP!!!

“OW!! FINE!!”

SLAP!!!

“Uhhhh Shadow I think he gets it.” Said Brenden who knew that the last slap was uncalled for.

“I know but that one was for kidnapping me. Twice!” Said Shadow who was about to slap John again but Shawna stopped him.

“That’s enough Shadow.” She said.

“Fine. Now John do you know where Walter would had of taken Juan?” Asked Shadow getting back on track.

“No not really.”

“WHAT!!!!” Cried everyone but John.

“HOW DO YOU NOT KNOW?!?!” Cried Shadow.

“I just don’t! Walter only showed me that warehouse! But he did tell me he had others across the city.”

“Oh great! Now how are we going to find them?!” Said Brenden as he slapped his face.

“Yeah! Any ideas Shadow? Shadow?” Asked Shawna to Shadow but he wasn’t there. He walked away from the group and looked up into the night sky.

“Shadow are you alright?” Asked John.

This time Shadow didn’t answer. He was deep in thought.

“Shadow?” Asked Brenden.

“Leave him. He’s just worried about Juan.” Said Shawna.

“That’s true. You two should had of seen the fight he gave me. He really wanted to protect Juan.”

“Yeah and Juan gets really worried about Shadow to. You see I came in after the fight you guys had and I saw all the things Juan did for him. I could also see how much Shadow worried for Juan.”

“I got it.” Said Shadow finally.

“Got what?” They asked.

“I got Juan’s sent. Come on lets go!” He said as he ran forward.

“Hey wait for us!” Cried Shawna as they ran after him.

With Juan and Walter

They finally made it to another warehouse that was far from the city.

“Why are we here?” Asked Juan.

“So I can drop you off and no one will ever find you!” Said Walter as he entered the building.

“No! Just let me go!!” Juan Cried as he tried again to squirm free. But it did nothing again.

“It’s no use child! You won’t be getting out for a long time to come!” Said Walter as he opened a door to a large room. This room had one large bed, small kitchen, and a bathroom. And the color of everything was white. Just plain white.

“Enjoy your new home for the next couple of years!” He said as he threw Juan on the bed and left.

“Oh great! Now I’m stuck in here! Ugh! And I still have no energy to get out! Oh I hope Shadow and Shawna come to save me! If they can find me.” Juan said as he laid down on the bed.

With the others following Shadow

“Shadow are you sure you know were you are going?” Asked Brenden as he looked around. He didn’t see the city anywhere.

“Shhhhhhh!!! If you keep talking I might lose it!” Said Shadow who didn’t want to lose the sent.

“Ok fine!”

All of them were just running for their life’s trying to keep up with Shadow who was going as fast as he could so he can see Juan again. Then all of a sudden he stopped. And everyone else almost ran past him.

“What’s the ma-“ Said John when Shadow put his hand on his mouth. He then pointed ahead of him and everyone saw Walter looking at them.

“So where you just following me?” He asked.

“Hell yeah! Why wouldn’t we?!” Asked Shadow.

“Oh I don’t know maybe for the fact that I can break every bone in your body with one punch!” Said Walter as he got up in Shadow’s face.

“SO!!!! THAT’S HAPPENED TO ME ATLEST 10 TIMES BEFORE!!!” Said Shadow back at Walter.

“OH YEAH?!?! THEN TAKE THIS!!!” Walter said and then punched Shadow in the stomach and it sent him flying backward.

“Shadow!!!!” Cried Shawna. She ran toward him to see if he was ok but Walter kicked her in the other direction.

“Hey!!! Don’t you know not to hurt girls!?!?” Shouted Brenden who ran after Walter.

“You shouldn’t of done that!” Shouted Walter as he punched Brenden multiple times in the face. He then kicked him and he was sent on top of Shadow.

“Well that was easy. But wasn’t there four of you?” Walter asked. He then got a gun shot to his back.

“What the hell?!?!” He shouted as he turned around to see John holding a gun.

“Leave…them…alone.” John said.

“Or wh-“

BANG, BANG, BANG, BANG!!!!!

John shot Walter in the face that time. “OW!!!! WHAT THE HELL?!?!”

“Where is Juan?”

“Like I’ll te-“

BANG!!!!

“OH MY GOD!!!!”

“Now I’ll ask it again. Where is Juan?”

“NEVER!!! I WON’T EVER TELL YOU!!!”

Finally Shadow pushed Brenden off him and ran after Walter. He then jumped up and rapped his arms around his neck.

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! GET OFF MY YOU LITTLE BRAT!!!!” Walter shouted and he started spinning around trying to get Shadow off.

“Not until we get Juan back!!!!” Shouted Shadow.

With Juan

He could hear everything that was going on out side. He heard everything from the gun shoots to when Shadow first slammed into a tree.

Shadow. He though. I wish I could do something to help but I still can’t do anything!!! Oh when I get out of here I will kill Walter! Juan then tried to get up out of the bed but he couldn’t even get on his feet. He then remembered what just happened a few minuets before at the other warehouse. Wait that’s it!

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Screamed Juan.

Outside the warehouse

Everybody just heard Juan scream.

“Juan?!” Said Shadow as he got off Walter and ran toward were the scream came from.

“HEY GET BACK HERE!!!!” Shouted Walter but Shawna grabbed his leg.

“Your not going anywhere!! Go get Juan Shadow!!!” She cried.

“LET ME GO YOU b***h!!!!”

“No!!!! Brenden go help Shadow!!!!”

“I’m on it!” Said Brenden.

“HEY YOUR NOT GOING ANYWHERE!!!!” Shouted Walter as he grabbed Brenden’s arm.

“Hey!!”

BANG!! BANG!!

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!” Cried Walter with bullets in his arm.

“GO NOW BRENDEN!!!” Shouted John. He then started to shoot Walter again.

“Ok thanks John!’ Brenden said when he ran after Shadow.

With Juan

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” He screamed again.

He could hear Shadow come for him. And to make sure Shadow knew were he was he screamed again and again and again. He wanted to make sure Shadow could find him.

“Hold on Juan I’m coming!!!’ Shadow screamed. He didn’t want to lose his friend now.

“Shadow wait for me!!!” Shouted Brenden who was running franticly.

“How about you just run faster!!!! We are almost there anyway!!!!” Shouted Shadow as he just kept running faster and faster.

“Slow down!!!”

“NO!!! NOT UNTIL WE FIND JUAN!!!!”

Juan was shocked to hear how much Shadow cared for him. It was like the two were like brothers. But he just kept on screaming his head off again.

And soon Shadow and Brenden made to the room were Juan was. But the door was locked (again). Shadow was now more pissed than ever and started to bang on the door (again). But this time it was a lot stronger. And Brenden tried to crack the lock’s code.

“JUAN!!!! JUAN!!!!” Cried Shadow as he started kicking the door.

“SHADOW!!!!” Cried Juan but he couldn’t move. He was still too weak after he had all his power drained.

“JUAN!!! WE ARE COMING!!!! JUST HOLD ON!!!! BRENDEN ARE YOU ALMOST DONE?!?!”

“It won’t be for a few more minutes. This is a really long code.” Said Brenden.

“WELL HURRY UP!!!!! WE NEED TO GET JUAN OUT OF THERE!!!!” Shouted Shadow as angry as ever.

“Ok, ok I’m going as fast as I can! So just hold on for a few more minutes!”

“JUST HURRY YOUR a**!!!!”

With John, Shawna and Walter

BANG! BANG! BANG!

John was randomly shooting at Walter. He didn’t want him to get anywhere near Juan. While Shawna was trying to kick and punch Walter but he blocked some hits.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Shouted Walter as he shot John and Shawna away from him. “NOW I CAN GO STOP THOSE TWO!!!!”

“Ugh! Hey get back here!!!!” Shouted Shawna as she got up and ran after Walter. But he just shot her back.

“Hey leave her alone!” Screamed John as he started shooting Walter again. But Walter dodged them.

“GOOD BYE YOU BITCHES!!!!” Said Walter as he ran into the building.

End.

Alright so that was part 2 of the 3. I hope you liked it as much as i like makeing it!!!! But please tell me what you think and I guess I'll talk to you later!!!





 
 
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