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Today I Did:
THE FIGHT

one day we had a fight,
we argued through tha nite,
we argued through tha day,
we went a seperate way,
our hearts were at a race,
it went whole new pace,
its never gone before,
i walked rite out that door,
i could stand no more,
i said that i wuz mad,
they said that they were mad,
we were friends again,
and i wuz very glad!


That wuz very random, so if its not that good u know y! plz leave comments on how u like it! biggrin domokun domokun domokun domokun esdfrotvuigbwervobwerouvbweovubowueybfvouwebhyfrvouebyrvouhbfvohbwefrovhbwofuvhbouehvbouhwvbouhwbvouwbfvouywbvouybrewvouyrebvouyebrvouyber!

Srry about that.... i got bored! 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh






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Ebania
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 02, 2006 @ 04:02am
It was a lovely poem, but needs a bit more fluency. But you're off to a great start with the writing scheme. smile


commentCommented on: Fri Jan 06, 2006 @ 03:16am
thatz a kick a** poem whee ,better then my stupid a** things blaugh ,lol i drawed u a pic on foxy ill show u at skool 4laugh



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