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madtvlover93
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Fingers of rose tickled the sky,
as the orbs of brown-grey opens
it eyes, the world comes into
light, green lush fields sway to
the wind, the null grey concrete
glimmers gold along with the metallic
shine of synthetic paints, what little
of the real world sings melodies sweet
and long, chirping of the bushy tails,
a new day of apple-growing begun.





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aacrylicrain
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Fri Mar 27, 2009 @ 03:42am


THe poem is interesting, funny how you call me a lit. geek when you use the "fingers of rose" line from the odessy. I also noticed how you added nature and human society in the poem; giving a sense of the natural world has merged with teh modern one. Oh, and of coarse you end it with apples!


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