Welcome to Gaia! :: View User's Journal | Gaia Journals

 
 

View User's Journal

Report This Entry Subscribe to this Journal
Short Strings and Things
Hello, you are about to enter my journal, my head and some of my deepest thoughts, I hope your ready for this because I know I’m not, leave a comment if you dare, share with the class what you think and maybe I’ll get back to you. . .
Never Get Away. . .
Never let me pull you down
Creeping into your heart
No one can ever stop me
You shall fall
When I pull this knife across your throat

You pull away
Never let you go
Can’t pull away
Violently killed
By my hands
You can not believe it
Why will this happen to you

You are bleeding out
Bleeding out forever more
On to the floor

Bleeding out . . .

Can . . .Never get away. . .

Silent Vampyre
Community Member
  • [03/12/09 08:53am]
  • [02/24/09 07:06am]
  • [01/03/09 08:33am]
  • [01/03/09 08:32am]
  • [01/03/09 08:30am]
  • [12/16/08 07:58am]
  • [12/06/08 09:34pm]
  • [12/06/08 09:33pm]
  • [12/06/08 09:31pm]
  • [12/06/08 09:30pm]




  • User Comments: [3]
    Silent Vampyre
    Community Member





    Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 07:07am


    I don't quite know what I was thinking when I made this one ^-^ but I was listing to "Falling away from me" by Korn when I made it.


    Ahh-RealSwagger
    Community Member





    Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 11:45pm


    *Gulps and touches hand to throat* O.O;!!
    Bell . . . Bella? P-please don't kill me. . . ?
    JKJK! I thought this poem was awesome, the brutal straightforward-ness of it literally sent a chill down my spine. I like the rhythm of it, as this is always something I look for in a poem - a good rhythm. This has it, I believe.
    Honestly, I think it is now one of my favorites of your work.
    5/5 stars.


    Silent Vampyre
    Community Member





    Wed Feb 25, 2009 @ 12:46am


    Wowzers! thank you Sweet V x2~! xDD I really like it myself but more importantly I'm happy you enjoyed it!


    User Comments: [3]
     
     
    Manage Your Items
    Other Stuff
    Get GCash
    Offers
    Get Items
    More Items
    Where Everyone Hangs Out
    Other Community Areas
    Virtual Spaces
    Fun Stuff
    Gaia's Games
    Mini-Games
    Play with GCash
    Play with Platinum