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I am now fiffteen and I love poetry for all that I am worth and I shall be sixteen in May, so I'm pretty excited and I'm ready to get my game on, go Sophmores. Graduating year of 2012 A.K.A Ace Duce
Sky
Let me live
let me die
as long as I
can touch the sky
you could hurt me
and I would not care
because when I touch the sky
your not even there
so hit me
beat me
kick me twice
it's nothing but a little sacrifice
so I will say this
without a flinch
you can kiss my a**
while i'm in bliss
because this is my last
dieing wish
for you to be happy
even though I die
in this world
of you ever ending hate
and bitterness.






User Comments: [1]
290DarkStars
Community Member





Thu Feb 19, 2009 @ 08:27am


woa man, it was like just yesterday that we where talking obout constricting hugs and fruity pebbles. I diddnt know that you could get so deep. Man this rocks. If it isnt posted at the white house in 5 hours then somethings up! mrgreen hah. Man I sometimes dream of the day that I may rest from the haunting spirits, man you nailed it. and by the time you have read this far into the comment I bet your thinking "what the crud! he's still talking?!" well then, yup! Im still talking because I just cant shutup about how much you and your poetry here rocks! and by now your thinking "point made, and thank you!... Now SHUTUP!" haha! mrgreen well sorry for the trouble... and "oh, my gosh make it stop!" ok, ok. your poem here ROCKED! mrgreen and please dont be mad about my exited tounge! lol well, kudos! mrgreen and God Bless.
-290 Dark Stars in the night sky
P.S.- remember Jesus loves you. heart


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