Well this is pratically one of my best chapters in a book that I'm wiritng right now but iIm out of ideas so heres one of the chapters:
"chapter 3"
I sat on the forest floor scared, worried, mixed emotions I couldn't explain. I stood up and began to run, I didn't know which way I was going. I ran for long time or what seemed to be, I wasn't paying attention I ran off a cliff and into a rushing river.
I tried to fight the pressure of the water, I struggled to breath, it didn't matter how hard I tried it got worse, my lungs were being filled with the water, but it didnt matter how hard I tried the rushing of the river was to powerful for me. I finally stopped I tried to listen there was a sound of a waterfall, I tried to fight aganst the pressure agian, before I could I was lunged off the edge dropped thousands of feet. I landed in another pool of water,the air was misty, I was cold,I could hardly breath, I crawled to the surface then collasped I began to close my eyes I saw someone walking towards me but I couldnt make out the firgure I was too tired and then everything went black.
I woke in a strange palce, it was cold, and dark. My vision was still somewhat blurred but I was only to make out some things, I was able to breath more easily,but i was in pain all over. I tried to move but I was so out of energy but I heard a voice,
"Are you okay?" his voice was hard and cold he sounded familiar but I couldn't remeber "Now that you're awake it's time."
I tensed and sat up with diffculty I focused my vision on him, he was skinny, his eyes hard and cold almost black,his skin was pale. He bared his teeth the lunged towards me, I stood up quickly and dodged him, but he missed I hit something sharp in my arm it was deep. I didn't have time to see what it was, I ran he was behind me, I held a hand on my wound it was gushing blood, I ran as far as I could go until I lost him.
I found shelter to stay at, I tore a peice of my clothing to cover up the wound on my arm, I waited until the sun went down, I was drowsy, to tired to keep my eyes open, I finally fell asleep. When I woke the same man was standing over me, I tried to move but he was holding me down I yelled,
"What the hell do you want!!"
He stared at me for a long time not saying anything he finally said,
"All I wanted was your love." he stopped he looked away and said my name "Rose, I'm sorry."
I looked at him "How do you know me? And what do you meen you're sorry?"
He stared at me again "Because I love you Rose"
He bent down sinking his teeth into my neck, draining my blood killing me. He pulled back and held me in his arms crying as he watched the darkness entered into my eyes, he held me closer saying,
"Rose, I'm sorry, I'm so sorry Rose" He repeated over and over again, he felt guilty he left and never returned and he never was seen again.
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Heres one of the chapters but I need ideas for other chapters please comment.
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