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I did this one as a sort of test, but I like the way it turned out. Ill bold the test part so you can see the inner meaning of this work. I cant remember the last time that I saw day. Like a child out in the rain. Only if I could see, Vacantly, a house will wait. Entwined, lost in eternity. Young the night will stand, Onward with steady hand, Under a sky gone black. So many come and gone, Others will lust for only one. Many times I've searched for you, Ultimately it all fell. Calling out to get to you, Having fun in my own Hell. , Catastrophic, waiting, Almost none will know. No one contemplating, The love that I would show. Young the night will stand, Onward with steady hand. Under a sky, gone . . . So many come and gone . . . Entwined lost in eternity, Entwined for all eternity. ? NMetalFox · Thu Dec 11, 2008 @ 03:29am · 1 Comments


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Im a lyricist, check out my journal!

I am here to accelerate this thread!

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Irradell
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Thu Dec 11, 2008 @ 06:05pm

Usually those are very hard to do but you pulled it off nicely, and without making it seem like you had to stretch the words to fit. I like it.

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