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Disclaimer: I don't own the Akatsuki... because well, they own themselves. And if I did own them I would most defiantly have some yaoi action going on in there, but that doesn't matter much.

I was bloody; covered head to toe in crimson jelly. I felt my body go entirely numb. I had no hope of surviving this fight. This time. I heard my katanna clank down to the cold, hard ground. I groaned in pain.

"Useless pathetic b***h you are, Kadina." A familiar voice muttered in monotone.

My mind was racing, trying to figure out what was going on. This familiar man kept reappearing again and again in my living nightmare. I winced, all I wanted was for this person to die. I wanted to taste their blood, feel the blood run down my claws. How I longed for that.

I clutched my waist and screeched in pain. The voice rang through my ears once more, "Weakling, you'll never make it in this life."

My eyes and ears started to throb in a musical pattern. I felt myself be pulled down to the ground.

"Where's your grace; your style? Kadina, the great goddess of the darkness. I thought you would put up a better fight."

This man wasn't fighting fair. He waited until my life had shattered to strike me when I was already dead inside. The man I thought I had fell in love with abandoned me; just like the rest.

*Flashback*

"Hello, Deidara!" I smiled gently at the blue-eyed bomber who was staring in the mirror.

"Deidara?" I asked, thinking something had happened to him. Deidara stood there, glaring into the mirror with an unseen flame in his eyes.

"Kadina, go away, un." He hissed, not letting his eye-sight stray away from his picture in the mirror. I felt my heart drop.

"Dei-Chan, come on, don't be rude." I giggled and gave Deidara a warm embrace from behind, just as he did the night before.

The next thing I felt was his right hand against my cheek. Deidara glared at me and angrily stomped out of the bathroom.


*End of flashback*

I felt my hand make its way to where my heart was. I grabbed my skin and tried desperately to rip it out. I began to sob. The one time I trusted a human with my fragile heart my life had ended up in a garbage can.

"I swear." I started," When I come back I will have regained my powers. I will kill everyone I come into contact with. I will kill Deidara." I vowed and felt myself drift off into my dream land. . .


So should I continue or does it suck? I need opinions, thank you. ^^
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    commentCommented on: Sat Dec 06, 2008 @ 08:07pm
    finish it!!!!!!!!


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