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This writing called poetry
This will be my somewhat failure attempt(at least to me) at the thing humans call...poetry... sweatdrop any comments please post blaugh

I'm sorry if I have given you pain
I know, it is a shame
a boundary made, separating suffering from wishes
is now broken up, like a frightened school of fishes
whispered promises, once believed
are now lies; feeling deceived
you back down into the shadows.
Cowering in fear
you sink too near
to the floor so dirty,
never to become flirty,
ever again

xd
this was an apology to one of my friends.. of course it doesn't look much like an apology, because i modified it >.< again, let me know if this is good, and i dont mean harm to my friend xd






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nennay
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commentCommented on: Thu Dec 04, 2008 @ 02:06am
hmmmmmm.

i wonder...........

ninja


commentCommented on: Tue Dec 16, 2008 @ 10:39pm
Whoah o.o Thats really good



Synayo
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