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chapter 3: him
He had tan skin and his hair was black. he had on glasses. i walked up to him and asked "hi whats your name?" "Aiden." he said. "whats yours?" "Britany."i said. "how old are you?" i asked him. "fifteen...how old are you?" he said. "fifteen." i said. "do you want to be friends?" i asked him. "sure" he said cheerfully. "whats your address?" he asked me. 47 N. Carver street." i said. "you?" i asked. "27 S. Carver." he said. "i have to go my mom is probably worringabout me." i said. "OK see you again hopefully." he said back. "yeah see you." i said back. i walked away thinking about what had just happened in the library and how it had happened so fast i wish it would all just stop. why didnt i ask him if he went to my new school i thought. then i walked home still thiking of Aiden. the walk was silent and when i got home and went in the door Emily was sleeping on the couch. "her barbie dolls were in the toyroom." said mom. "OK." i said in a hushed voice and then i went into my room. CRASH! BOOM! BANG! "what was that?" i asked my mom. that was probably Emily getting something to eat...hey when did you get here?" i said. "i was taking the laundry up to throw it down the shoot." she said. CRASH! BOOM! BANG! "thats not Emily." i said. "i have only been here for like 2 minutes and i have never seen
Emily move from one place to the other that fast." i said. i ran down the stairs and saw someone stealing my moms favorite vase. "put that down!" i yelled. that woke up Emily and she held her hand out and a powerful blast of light came out. "whoe!" i said with shock in my voice.
"what was that?" i said.






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Crossfire Lf
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commentCommented on: Wed Oct 08, 2008 @ 05:19pm
wow this story is getting good keep up the good work ^^


commentCommented on: Mon Jul 20, 2009 @ 01:59am
Whoa! I did NOT see that coming! This story is getting better than I thought is would!



Nibi-san
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Xx-katie-cutie-xX
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 06, 2010 @ 07:29pm
holly chiz i told you your a born writter now you need to read my story
:^) ok thats pretty good but you need to check your spellin cuz it looks like that says somethin else its spelled whoa not whoe that looks like somethin else smile


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