Everyone is in love with this poem I wrote about my father. My mom says it brought tears to her eyes, I think or something about how it's heartbreaking and how good it is. :/ Don't know....
Here you all can read it and tell me if you agree or not?
When I was a little girl,
Every now and then my little head would twirl
As I watched my parents marriage unravel
His car always cruising away fast against the gravel
He left us without anything at all,
For other women, not even leaving my sister and me a phone call
My mother, sister and I were living poor,
But we were happy, careless and immature
Life was what we wanted it to be,
We did what we pleased, just us three
Though since I was young and so very naïve
I still loved him, thought I could believe
But the older I grew the more I knew
I learned almost everything my father said was untrue
What my mother said to him many years ago
'Keep your money, and just leave the girls alone'
I think about it every single day,
Sometimes wishing he would do what she'd say
I feel my heart beat in so many directions,
Things he's said and done have made me have so many reflections
I hate him so much most of time,
The things he does to me and my sister, I almost consider a crime
Yet, as much as hate him for all his misconceptions
Saying I hate him so much as much as I should would be a great deception
For all the things he's done, I want to hate him so bad,
But I just can't help the way I feel, I can't stop loving him; my dad.
She was also going on with my step dad about how talented I am because I can draw, write, and cook. :/ Anyways, how's the school year going for everyone....
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