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Some random rants that I'll slap down in two seconds or less.
A Poem!!!
Here I am, American
Wandering out to the farthest limits
Of my reality, gone far, far, but not
Far enough, searching, searching
For places to put my pride,
American Pride, where is it?
In a box in my room underneath
The piles of disaster developing
In my room.
The Stupidity is overwhelming
Here, Aparently, common sense
Plays no part, and the Ruler
Has no hopes of achieving the
Impossible

-Kyle






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Sweetkitty
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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 23, 2005 @ 08:05pm
cool poem


commentCommented on: Mon Sep 26, 2005 @ 02:10am
Thankyou mrgreen



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Selete
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 24, 2006 @ 06:55pm
Beautifully worded, and quite an accurate reflection of the American state of affairs, I think. :3 Nice progression.

Might wanna work on the title, though. surprised


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