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LOVE... What is it? It brings pleasue and pain It makes tears fall of your face like rain It also makes you smile like you never have before Whenever there is a high there is a low Sometimes you dont know what to do Is Happiness worth the sorrow later on? You say "I Love You" and they say "I Love You Too" But is it true? And you just dont know what to do Do you continue and go through with it with them? Or do you stop and stop pain and pleasure altoghter? And if you do continue do you just wait until they end it and give them the credit of stopping the pain and pleasure? You choose what you want to do I wanted peoples opinons about my poem so please comment

Posted by: Xx-UnWiNgEd-AnGeL-xX Wed Jul 09, 2008 @ 07:33pm

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Emo_Isabelle
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Commented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 08:56pm


	your poem is very true.I get hurt being emo,but people say I love u and sometimes they dont mean it they r just with u cause ur cool or a rockstar and I get hurt to much because of it .

Commented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 09:07pm


	Yo foo, u didnt right this poem..............its a nice though^^

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Commented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 09:20pm


	That poem is awesome, I think you stole it from shakespear fool. Darn you!!! -shakes fist- Its good.

Commented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 09:41pm


	ish good

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Commented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 09:43pm


	This is good. It sounds so deep. 3nodding

Commented on: Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 11:07pm


	OMG! I trully heart it that poem is so sweet ,true did u actually wrote this if u did ur good at it I luv it! I luv it! I luv it! I luv it!

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Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 01:00am


	Thiis wuz nice!!! You sure get credit from m3.....but h3y u got talent wut can ii say lol

Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 01:04am


	WHY DOESNT ANYONE BELIEVE I WROTE THIS!!!!!!! crying crying

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Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 01:10am


	this foo is my cousin and i know when his lying.............and well he wrote this poem........his very talented

Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 01:45am


	awe so moveing! heart I love it because its so true :3

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Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 07:36pm


	i really like this poem good job oaj domokun 3nodding

Commented on: Sat Jul 19, 2008 @ 09:33pm


	Very true, people can relate to what you wrote here... Good job expressing your feeling. biggrin

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Commented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 06:19am


	Okay heres what I gotta say... OMG, god bless you boy for writing such a good poem! It was rly good I must say, just one thing though, it gets a little confuesin at the end but tother then that nice.

Commented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 08:06am


	I love you heart heart heart

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Commented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 08:10am


	cry heart that is so good oaj! i believe you wrote it! truly! 3nodding

Commented on: Sun Jul 20, 2008 @ 08:15am


	OMG that was awesome I heart you. biggrin

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Nadine 0_o
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Commented on: Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 09:01pm


	wow its awesome u truly got talent very good i heart it

Commented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 08:27am


	Woah... The poem was actually meaningful... werid... Well good job on the poem.. I guess... ^_^

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Commented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 08:43am


	Interesting poem.

Commented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 08:50am


	That was really sweet. heart Have any more poems?

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Xx_E-V-I-L_L-U-V_xX
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Commented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 09:02am


	It's good. I really don't know what to say because I'm not really into poems.

Commented on: Sat Jan 03, 2009 @ 05:54pm


	Nice poem and so true.. i'm going through something similar to this.

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Commented on: Sun Feb 08, 2009 @ 01:24am


	That poem is....beautiful. But is it yours? biggrin

Commented on: Tue Feb 10, 2009 @ 12:48am


	heart i luv da poem iz so sweet did u write it or iz it sum1 elses heart

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