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The Old life, Chapter 17

The figure was breathing heavyly, then it spoke,"Blood...blood...all of your blood will satisfy me!" It was Sensui. We couldn't see Grimu now and we didn't know when he'd come back down; we didn't have time to wait for him. Sensui brought out his sord. Its color was a coal black, the edges sharped to create needles. But then he trashed around, hunching over. His sword falling to the ground. "No...stop... Don't make me do this!" We were confussed with his actions.
Taking Heart Break from his shelth and sprinted toward Sensui. Once I was ten feet away from him, he stopped his crys. His yellow eyes widen, red vein-like lines showing in them. I brought my sword up to strict him but it had been blocked by Sensui's sword that he picked up faster then the eye could see. Before that he said something, "You will be my slave until I've had my fill." His voice was more demonic then before. Before he sounded like a desperate man but now his voice was filled with vemon.

(Boda's POV)
While I was trying to push Sensui off, Boda saw a speck in the sky. At first it looked like a bird flying downward but looking closer it was Grimu falling head first. Vocami glanced at her when she gasped. Without hesitation she ran past Sensewi and me and in two minutes Grimu was in Boda's arms. She checked him over, but he wasn't really damaged. Suddenly his eyes popped open. He got out of Boda's arms and charged at Sensui.

(Saga's POV)
'Idiot', I thought to myslef then jumped back so he could have his way with Sensui. From the way he just charged at us with not even thinking he would kill us, with Sensui, if we joined in to fight with him. Sighing I placed Heart Break back into his shelth and walked over to Vocami, who watched the whole thing. "He's lost it, huh?" "Pretty much." "It would be much faster if we could join in." We? It's only me and Boda and besides we can't." Me and Vocami watched as Grimu and Senseui fought. Boda got into the fight finally but got herself punched in the face by Grimu. She jumped back, shocked. "Boda! Come over here before you get hurt." She ran over to us tyring not to get in Grimu's way. "You alright?" asked Vocami. "No! Grimu just punched me in the face!" "We saw." "Why didn't you help!" "Because he doesn't want it," Vocami joined in on the conversation," All his life, he has told himslef that he'll find Sensui and that he will kill him." I was too busy watching Grimu lay a jutsu on Sensui as Vocami explained things to Boda. The jutsu caused his bandages to form into a huge drill. While watching, I wondered what was going through his mind.

(Grimu POV, when landing in Boda's arms)
Grimu felt the rush of air leave his body and the smooth, warm hands of someone caught him. A surge of energy went through him causing his eyes to open. In a flash he was out of Boda's arms and went for Sensui. Sensui wasn't looking at him. He was concentrating on a black figure that was attacking him. 'No!. You will not have that chance to kill him. Only me!' ( If you haven't noticed yet, Grimu can't see us because he's been over taken by his rage) The figure must have noticed him becasue it jumped out of the way letting Grimu have a hit or two.
The only thing on his mind was taking out Sensui. His mind didn't know where his comrades went to and didn't care. Out of no where another black figure appeared trying to get their hands on Sensui. He punched them in the face to scare them away and it worked. The battle went on for thirty minutes. Between that time Grimu got slashed on his legs that were trembling, arms and chest. They weren't damaging to any organs but a lot of blood came out. His breath was heavy, blood forming spots on his bandages. "Why don't you bring over you friends, so I can heal and send you all to your end." "What friends?" "Your so caught up in the fight, you don't realize that you damaged one of your own." "So, ... those shadows...they were." Suddenly he coughed up blood. Sensui smirked in satisifcation. He raised his sword to make the final blow. Suddenly a dust cloud formed around him.






User Comments: [2]
Marashi Tyriu
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Fri Jun 27, 2008 @ 07:49am


to many colors, good chapter tho


Saga-Saland
Community Member





Fri Jun 27, 2008 @ 05:40pm


the colors are meant to show who's talking but i was just giving it a try


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