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Crimson Killer

Were dark poems lie.



Bloody Roses Roses are red. The violets are dead.Sugar is sour like a dead bloody flower.I stare at your grave. Your warm touch I crave.In my field bloody roses.I will yield an inch of my future.These bloody roses now turn a dirty brown. The make me frown. In time they will be stained with blood again.

Posted by: crimson_rose 773 Fri Apr 25, 2008 @ 03:39pm

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wafflekun009
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Commented on: Mon Jun 02, 2008 @ 05:41pm


	i liked the concept, i think you started off good, but it kinda faltered near the end. i would have liked it if you would have kept the ryme. but you gave me a great idea for a picture!

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