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Another loud clap of thunder came as a wisps of colored smoke started to come out of Kailua's vacant eye sockets. Forming into what looked to be a very angular masculine face, with no feature staying the same for more than a moment.

"You girls," The lips moved out of sync with the words, "need to learn some manners."

"But lord," Agatha said, bowing down to him, "I was obeying your commands."

"Agatha, this I know, but I cannot allow only one of you to get punished. The other may leak secrets even after being warned." The smoke face turned to look at the long haired woman.

"Yes lord, I see the fact." Agatha seemed very calm about her demise. "I'm sorry it has to end this way." Looking up at him, she opened her mouth and a large cloud of smoke lifted gently on the small breeze coming out of the fireplace.

In this ever so light cloud of smoke, a woman's face became clear. All smooth warm features, giving off the light of ten suns, dimmed for their eyes. The eyes looked at the wispy man.

"You've gotten sloppy, brother." Were her ownly words, before her light became so unbearable, nothing was seen. Only after ten minutes and they could see again, did they find Kailua and the wispy man, gone. Where Kailua stood a pile of ashes were, but nothing of the wispy man.

"This cannot be good." Priscilla said, looking to Agatha. "You have gotten us in a mess with the gods. I knew I should have worked solo. I never got in trouble by myself." Her voice had changed, from sickeningly sweet to sweetly angry.






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sOuL_DeSiRe
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 19, 2005 @ 11:37pm
nice jornal


commentCommented on: Mon Aug 29, 2005 @ 02:04am
When are you going to do the next part? gonk



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