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She Sneaks down a darkly lit hallway. She holds the candle close to her face, illluminating her way. In her mind the following runs through it " I mustnt hurry, or I could miss it..but..if I dont and they notice my abbsence theyll come this way and find me..but..how could they?Its the middle of the night..but..." A sound of voices from behinde her breaks the thought that she had started. "Ohh..why lord have I come to this?"a voice says sadly, almost as if they were talking to someone. She blows out the candle and presses herself against the wall as they walk past. Only a fellow escapee she notices. She lights the candle again and quietly catches up the the figure. They notices her foot steps and quicky turn around. "ohh..only you" the figure relaxes. "escaping?" She askes as they quietly march silently down the corridor. "yeah.." Suddenly another voice joins in. "Hurry! We cant let them escape!" its one of the hulky masters voices. "s**t. Quick follow me." the figure quickens their pace to a run. She fallows the figure with a worried thought "I hope they know where theyre going...". The figure quickly turns and then climbs up . She can barely keep up. When they get to the top they are at the roof of the building. She looks up to see the brilliant stars and moon. "Glorrious.."she mummers. She has never seen the sky. "Quickly!" the figure, which she notices is a small , scruffy girl is already on the other side of the roof. She runs and looks to where shes pointing. Its atleast 19 meters down. "Are you nuts?" she hoarsly wispers, "anyways, why should I trust you? I dont even know youre name!" the other girl looks at her with a spunky look. "My name is Mop. Now return the favor and tell me yours."
"My-my name? Well..umm..its.."She thinks for a second for a good name, "my name is Kao." At that momment the men burst through the roof. "Mmakay! K..Kao hold pon to me real tight kay?"Mop says as if this is a fun game. "O--okay.." Kao grabs on for her life and just as she expected Mop jumps of the building. "Ive..never been outside..this is outside right?" Kao askes as they fall away from the building. "Yess..and get used to it cuse' were never going back to the "home" again." on the word again Mop grabs her head band and wispers "touchless" and all in one retarded moment it bursts into a full set of air wings. "wow! how.."Kao is lost for words.


To be contiued.






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Huggie_Wuggie
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Tue Apr 15, 2008 @ 04:04am


interesting eva very intriguing you made many spelling mistakes and i believe it would be better if you remove the word retarded at the end it ruins the thrilling feeling. but yes its very good im interested in the next entry. but little more advice dont post on ur journal someone could steal it♥ just a warning. my rating 8 out of 10 very good!♥!♥!♥!♥! 3nodding


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