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~THE ANIME PRINCESS~
ok so this is the soon to be famous best seller book that me and all my friends made. so if your REALLY bored and have a couple of hours with nothing to do then here is your solution! no sit back and enjoy. biggrin

me(meli) - the awesome ninja with the awesome ninja skills also the anime princess

jacky(fancy-painted-boats) - the good vampire

shelly(sassyshelly-rawr-) - the stupid person.. that gets in the way... all the time. and screams alot. also has awesome ninja skills... and ends up saving the day at the last minute.

avery(CraveARave) - the weird looking one that if she bites u... u get rabies! and die.

joey(twi admiral[my brother]) - the ugly villian... who tries to still the anime princess(me) away.

okay... so here's my story:

meli and jacky were playing at the park... when avery came running towards us.

"it's horrible! the ugly villain, joey, is coming! we hav to hurry and get princess meli out of here! come on jacky!" she said.

"alright! let's go!" jacky grabbed meli's arm and started running towards the words.

"what if we get lost here?" meli asked.

"don't worry. i know this place well. i know a short cut to the castle." jacky assured her.

meli nodded.

they finally reached the castle.

"meli! what r u doing out of the castle! u know that ur not alowed to leave!" one of the guards said.

"but it's so boring in the castle! i had to go outside!" i winned.

"u know joey might get u some day." he complained

"i know i know." i said.

he glanced at jacky. "ha! i knew it! so it was U who helped her escape!" he yelled!

i grabbed jacky and ran inside, avery following close behind.

"we should b safe in here." i told them.

then the roof got torned off. it was joey! the ugly villian! we all screamed. he grabbed me and took me away.

"NO!" jacky and avery screamed.

stay tuned... for next time.. on the anime princess.

~meli

as we watch meli be stolen away by the evil villain i think quickly. "avery come on! we can go in my flying marshmellow and follow her!" i shout. i'm already at the flying marshmellow because vampires are super fast of course. i glance over at avery running at her slow human pace. this is going to take forever, i think. so i quickly zoom back and pick avery up and run her back towards the marshmallow. we get in and start flying towards the evil villains castle. as we're riding through the air i turn to avery. "what will we do when we get to the castle? you know there's all sorts of dangers awaiting there. " i say. she looks up and sighs. "i'm sure we'll find something out" she says. i look forward to realize we are approaching the evil castle. i land the marshmellow behind a bush and we get out. we creep slowly toward the gate. there are guards everywere i realize. "avery," i whisper, "lets split up and take em, and then we'll get in" so we launch out of our hiding spot screeming "aaaaaaaah!!!" and that catches all of those guard by suprise. avery throughs her flamingo at some guards and the flamingo bites them, giving them all rabies. they fall to the ground, paralyzed. meanwhile i am looking for some rope but cant seem to find any. what can i use? all of a sudden i remember. i have super long fast growing repunzel hair! so i take out some sizzors and cut off a long but of my hair to use for rope. i quickly tie all the unconcious bad guys up. and by the time i am finished my hair has already grown back. (lmao!) as we get ready to go inside the castle we hear a cry of "help!" from the top window. we look up to see meli leaning out calling to us.

will the heros be able to help meli? tune in next time to find out!!!

your not so great of a writer,
jacky

PART THREE (SHELLY'S POINT OF VIEW)

I'm sitting in kitchen eating some chocolate
And then i hear a long shrieking scream from the tower..i jump up
and put on my goddess outfit soo i can sneak in to blend in with the other royal people(im smart)
i use my magical powers to orb(transport) to the front of the castle
once i get there i see jacky and lola there staring at the castle...for a long time..doin nothing
being insulted by their lack of observations...
i clear my throat " ummmppp!"
"oohh shelly i didnt kno u were there" says jacky stupidly
"noo duhh..i heard someone screaming down here wat happened" i ask in suspicion
as they tell wat happened i have an epiphany(ahh sweeney todd moment..lol)
"well this is wat we could do..." i say knowingly
i tell them my plan and off we go...
as i go to the front door of the castle..jacky and lola r hiding by the bush
"excuse me sir, but i have a question" i ask the guard
"yes, ma'm wat is it" he says irrtated
" i was wondering..lets say a lion eats a bird on the thrid day of march by a tree, the tree with the bird's nest and of course they..." as i go on in my ridiculous worthless story
jacky has lola on her bac ready for action....then as fast as she can go, jacky speeds past the guard and me and goes into the castle soo fast we cant see her..
once i hear lola's "gooey gooey noise" i know they r in the castle safe..
"well miss i dont quite get the question..now is it the tree of the bird's nest that fell on the lion or is it another tree..if soo then.." says the guard
"umm..u kno wat im al out of time but thnks for helping" says i quickly
"umm..no prob" says the guard happily
and i run in the castle..as im looking for jacky and lola i hear another scream at the top of the caslte
i see a way to some stairs that seem to go all the way
"yes a there is a way" i say
as i start heading for the stairs two gentleman walk by me
"hello fellows nice day isnt it" i say with a fake smile
they look at each other and then grab me by my arms and pull me into a empty room
"WAT DO U WANT FROM ME!!" I scream in their face
"shh its us u idiot" says lola smartly
"yea u guys ..now lets go..we dont have much time!"
and off we head towards the tallest part of the castle......


will shelly, jacky, and lola succeed their goal of getting meli?!?!?!

tune in next time for PART 4

Part 4
me and avery (lola) put shelly into a dude costume with us. she objects, of course, being the sissy she is. "what if i break a nail?" she crys. oh well. not my problem. so we quickly head back out of the room. we start creeping back up the many stairs as quitely as we can, as not to be noticed. a group of gentleman are walking down the stairs. we nod towards them politely and try to move on. "is the plan ready?" he asks us. oh lord what plan? i thinks quickly and step forward. "why yes sir. it is. and the boss says 'the marshmellows fly at midnight.' care to interpret?" i ask. his eyes grow wide. he looks at his fellow men. "you mean theres a code double o' seven?" he asks me. whats that supposed to mean? i wonders. "why yes there is!" i say. "you better get downstairs right away!" i tell them. he nods in agreement and runs down the stairs, his men following. "what dreadfully stupid guards." i say to my friends. and we start breaking out into laughter. "HEEEEELPPP!!!!!!" oh no! the anime princess! "come on we better hurry!" avery says. we nod in agreement and run up the stairs.

pART 5

as we run towards the crys of meli
we see a corner and before we turn it we hear some guards talking bout their girlfriends and wat they r gonna do tonight
"guys i such losers" jacky saids disgusted
"i know" me and lola agree
"ok soo how r we gonna get passed them as well" says jacky scared
"umm..ohh i kno i can orb us all in the room" says i proudly
"oohh good idea" jacky says excitedly
"wait..if u can orb us into the room.. then y didnt u do that in the first place?" lola says cockingly
"because..i wanted to act like a ninja..duuhh" i snap
"ok both of u grab my hands..on three..one..two..three" i say
and poof we r in the room
"well that was easy" says lola smartly
"yea we did it" we say
then as lola is doing her victory dance..me and jacky stop..
we r mouthing her to stop but its too late
"go us go us go us"
lola says proudly
"ARRGGGGGGGGG!!" SAYS THE MONSTER
"HOW DARE U ENTR MY SCRET LAIR!!"
and we just stand there soo shocked that we cant move


will the three be able to get their courage bac and fight the monster?!?!

see if it happens next time....

part 6 (dotn read this untill you've read the beginning!)
as we stare at the monster in terror a wave of dispair washes over us. what are we to do? i think. we stare at the purple 1 eyed monster with this hideous look on his face. then an epiphany comes to me.
"YOU IDIOT!" i shout at shelly.
she looks at me with that stupid look on her face.
"you poofed us to the wrong room!" i yell
"oooh." she says, looking guilty.
i grab their hands and run to the door and kick it open. i push them out and lock the door behind us.
"how did you lock the door? we didnt have the key!" avery says to me.
i grab my necklace from around my neck and hold up my red skeloten key.
"oooooh" they say in unison.
"shelly how can you just poof us to the wrong room??" i shout
"i havent used my magic in a while" she sighs looking at her feet.
"your not much of a hero are you?" avery says glaring at her.
"forget it," i says " we'll have time for your stupidity later! lets go!"
so off we run back up the stairs.

how much longer will the anime princess have to wait? tune in next time and find out!

~jacky
p.s. sorry shelly, but i had to get revenge! XD i'm no scared little girl!!!!

03/21/2008 4:53 pm
CraveARave
PART SEVEN!

We run up the stairs.
"This is really tiring" Shelly says.
"It's only tired if you are an idiot" Jacky says hurtfully.
"I'm sorry. Magic is kind of banned here, I can't use it all the time"
"Well maybe you should!"
"Well.. Well, Yo' Mamma' is sooo-"
"BE QUIET!" I say, heatedly "I hear something.." I get down on the floor and press my ear to the floor.
"Do you know filthy that floor is?" Shelly said, truely disgusted. I nod. I hear rumbleing. I hear terror. But most of all, I hear Meli.
"Go left!!" I shout.
"Huh?" Shelly and jacky say, like ignorant people. I ignore them and continue left, listening to everything around me.
"I bet Avery is just making this up, trying to feel like a hero," Jacky whispers.
"I know, who does she thing she is? Trying to be the leader in the group.." Shelly responds, finally agreeing with what jacky says.
"We should kill her off, right now. I'll come in from behind, and you-"
"I CAN HEAR YOU, YA' KNOW!" I fuse. I come to a door. Locked...
"Jacky! Here. Right now," I order.
"What am I, a dog?"
"Just do it, Unlock this." She does what she was talk and the door swings open. There is no floor in the room. We look down and see a bottom less pit. We look up and see Meli, trapped in a metel cage, dangleing from up above.

Will the find a way to save meli fom her cave? Find out next time in 'Anime princess- The princess of anime"


part 8
we stare awestruck at meli dangling from above.
"what are we supposed to do?" shelly whispers.
another epiphany!
"shelly, can you orb up there?" i ask quickly
"umm.....i dunno.. i mean last time i orbed..." avery cuts her off
"what if it doesnt work?" avery asks
"well you can try right?" i say annoyed
"fine." shelly says all huffy.
i hand her my keys.
"ok once you get up there, unlock the cage, and try to orb back down with the meli" i explain
"alrighty then" she says.
and off she orbs. and then we hear the screaming. she is on the outside of the cage, holding on with only one hand now, screaming her bloody head off!

will shelly fall into the bottomless pit? will we EVER rescue meli? tune in next time to find out!

hoping that your enjoying the cliffhanger in the litteral sense,
jacky XD

by the way shelly. it was nothing personal. you were just the only one who could get up there on your own! Smile

A dark haired girl in a komodo dress is hanging from the prisiner's cage. I've been taught on how to deal with trespasers, all of them foul and stinky. There are more then usual though, and they seem to have magical abilities.
"You there!" I boom into the cavernous chamber. I too have my abilities, throwing my voice beeing one of my fine tunned. "Trespasers!" "No one can save you now!" "Horrible wretches!" "I slay flamingos!" "Stop there!" "Your friend will fall to her death!" my voice echos around their filthy ears. They peer over their sholders in great concern, not being able to place my voice. ha ha ha... "Where are you?!" the one with brown hair shouts. "In your head, my lady," I answer,"I believe you're going mad!" ha ha ha ha. "We are more powerful then some bigheaded vantriliquist!" shouts the other agrily. "Somebody help me!" the dangling one yells. "as you wish," i whisper near her ear. "AAAA!" I jump from my perch above the cage and bomb drive to the girl who's legs are flailing. I rip her hands from the cage as she falls down the deep cave beside me. Everyone in the cave is yelling, except me. "Your friend would die," I say in my loudest voice, "I was just kidding." I reach out to her as to have a good grip, and the cord that is attached to my waist bunjee's us back up to the landing were her companions are, standing awestruck as i deposit their friend in front of them.
"This cave is off limits,"I growl at them, "And you would do well not to distube the princess again." I say, and point to the bold princess dangling in the cage, with tape over her mouth.

How will the girls respond to this bunjee jumping vantriliquest who just spared their frineds life when it was taught to him to "smoke the marshmellows"

Be prepared for the next exciting installment on...whatever show this is.

part 10

as we walk out of the door of th cave...jacky is furious and she wants her friend meli..NOW!!
she growls for a sec..
"umm jacky r u ok?" avery says
"grrrrrr....!! LET MY FRIEND GO!!" SHE YELLS
and without thinking she dashes off as fast as she can...but wait jacky..
she has just jumped off the cliff
"noooo jacky u stupid girl!" screams I
oohh wait...is she flying
"omg u have wings..how that happen?!" says avery
"i dont kno....maybe its luck" jacky says unknowingly
" uumm.." says i as a i giigle a bit
"wat?" says jacky irritated
"umm..the wings are comin out of ur butt!"says i
now me and avery r rooling on the floor laughing
"shut up u guys..meli is still in danger..u worthless piece of.." jacky grunts
"NOO U CANT DO THIS..HOW..I MEAN..UMM?" says celeste interrupting jacky's thoughts
"well u kno wat they say good guys always win...uuhh wat..omg noo .noo!" screams jacky
oohh noo shes loseing her wings
"they r gonna give out on her any second now..and shes gonna fall....!!" says i
"we must get her before she does fall...!" says avery franticly
"...guys hurr..noooooooo!" screams jacky
its too late shes already falling........


will avery and shelly think of a quick enough plan to save jacky..oohh but dont forget bout meli
will celeste try to help too?
who knows.........

PART ELEVEN

I try to hurry my thinking, and come up with something...
"EUREKA!" I yell!
"What?" They shout, kinda confused. But there is no time for answers, just doing. I grip onto my heart balloon and jump off.
"AVERY, NOOO!" They yell, not knowing my plan. "Hahaha!" Celeste the valtrilaquist yells. I am falling. But thats when my magic balloon takes action. It puffs up, and I start making my back up. I grab Jacky at the last minute. "Good thinking, huh?" I sneer.
"Oh just stup up, you bloody little-"
"Avery! the balloon is getting too big!" Meli yells from above. She's right! I am stuck halfway in the bottomless pit. How will i get out?
"Well, NOW you've done it."Jacky says making faces.
"Hey at least your alive!" I say to make her guilty.
"Well Yo' Mamma is sooo-"
"Will you guys SHUT UP!?" Shelly yells. We all gasp. Shelly maikng a stand to be a leader? Shelly finally trying to break up the fights. Avery actually being in the fights? And Jacky starting the fight? Wait, no, no, no.. Jacky ALWAYS starts the fights, that not a surprise...
"Haha, seems like you can't resue tha princess after all" "Too bad, your stuck" "And the princess is still dangling there" Says the veltriaquist. But was she wrong...
"Eeeeek!" We all look up. "Whats going on!? We cant see past this balloon!" Jacky yells.
"The cage just broke and meli fell down on the balloon" Said Shelly.

How will they get meli up? How will they save Avery And jacky? Will they pop the balloon? If they pop the balloon, will they fall to their deaths? And will the ventrilaquist ever lose her voice?

Part 12
"soo now...we r too high up..and now meli is on top of the balloon!!"screams jacky
"soo hows it goin up there?" asks shelly stupidly
"oohh we r just peachy fine..CANT U SEE WE R STUCK UP HERE?!" YELLS AVERY
"god shes such an idiot"whispers jacky to avery
"haha just wat i wanted!"says celeste in a sneaking laugh
"well no way u r gonna get out of that trap soo im leaving..cause i really gotta use the bathroom" says celeste racing out the door
"ok..well..lets see.." says i thinking
aaahh haaa and epiphany(lol)
"if u and jacky tilt over side to side..then meli can roll of the balloon and safely land on the floor over here"..i say
"well it does seem like it'll work...wat do u think ave..?"asked jacky
"umm..well lets try it theres nothing better to do" avery gives up
"ok one three u two will be swinging softly one on and two but jerk it on three to pounce meli down.." i say
"ok one...two ...three!"i yell
yes the plan has wor....noooo..nooo
we were too short of a distance and meli didnt make it
now shes on her way down the pit...
wat will we doo
"noo meli... U IDIOT Y DO WE LISTEN TO U!!!" SCREAMED JACKY AT SHELLY




how willl they save meli..again

part 13
okay, so yes... it seems as though i saved that dork with the white dress for nothing, she feel down AGAIN and is now trapped by a ballon. So i left because thoose little brats weren't gonna have a happy ending anyway..oh wait, i'm forgeting something! The Princess! and the "marshmellow flies by night"! won't my boss skewer me if i don't keep the princess safely in her little cage. LI shouldn't have left her alone with thoose bufoons because they might acually cause some harm, not on purpose of couse, they've promised their capibilty to be harmless, what with being saved, then falling, then sceaming, then blah blah blah, they're hopeless.
I turn around even though i reaaaaly gotta use the bathroom. I hear them screaming behind the door that leads into the cavern. I jump in and at that moment, the cage breaks.
"Noo meli! why do we listen to you, you idiot!" the brown haired one screeches.
meli?! the princess!
hooking my rope to the door knob of the door i leap after the princess as she falls to her doom. ANd i catch her! we land back on a ledge a bit above the brown haired one.
"Now listen here!" i yell at her. "I've already ordered you to leave! You are endangering the princess wiht your "heroic" NONSENSE!" NOW LEAVE! If you don't somebodies gonna get it.
"want to make a deal." says the brown haired one.

what will happen next?

part 14
still dangling from the balloon with avery. i thinks fast.
"what kind of deal?" celeste ask warily
"consider this," i says. "your boss seems DREADFULLY stupid...no offence to him or anything, ( XD ) so what if you were to join our side? and help us? savvy?" i says sounding hopefull. celeste is silent. and the balloon is slowly slipping down farther.
"i dont know" celeste mumbles, "what if he gets mad?"
"we are clearly more powerful then he is...even if we do get ourselves in trouble..." i say trying to compromise.
but the balloon is slipping farther and farther down. and if someone doesnt help us we will surely die
"theres no time!" i hear shelly shout.
"celeste, make your decision NOW!" i scream

(uh okay)
part 14
"Jeez if i wasn't so preesured,"
"Decide you imp!"
"Hey i'm not saying i love my boss, but you gotta understand, i have to protect the princess."
"We do too, DUH!"
"well,"
the two girls are slipping slipping...
"okay." I assure the princess that she's safe. I can't carry two people at once, so i jump across the cave trailing bunjee cord behind me, and i tie it off at the other side. the purple balloon catches on it a stops sliding down the tunnel.
"whew!" says the one with blue hair. I gather each of them, one at a time, and we land safely on the legde with the princess. "I do believe i have no idea what your names are. sorry.
"Shelly, that's Jacky, that's Avery. and this is OUR friend Meli."

"How do we know the ventrilaquist is to be trusted?" I yell. "She could just be doing this to get the princess to her boss!. PLus, I don't want her to do her ventrilaquist thing, thats too annoying!"
"Shut up Avery, she saved your life" Shelly grunted. I was just about to argue more of my case when..
"This way people!" Celeste Orders. "Chop chop!" Hey! How does she think she can just be the leader of the group like that? I was being the responsble one. And now I am looking out for us, and I get shot down. This Celeste cant be trusted.. We turn a corner. Up a couple flights of stairs. And enter a room. This is the tower were meli was locked up earlier.
"Why are we in-" I start. "SHh! I have a plan" Celeste whispers as she flings her bungee cord out the window. It hooks onto a tree at the castle grounds. She jumps out and slides down the cord.
"I don't want to slide down!" Shelly whined "It will hurt my hands!" I was so tired of shelly's whinning I push her out the window onto the bungee cord.
"Ooowiiiwwowooowwwiwie!" She shrieks. I follow after her. I look back and the rest of the gang is behind me.
"Over here" Celeste Yells.
"NO!" I yell. "I can't take this! You are NOT a good guy. And even if you were, you can't be the leader here. I won't allow it. You arnt the one seperating Jacky And Shelly when they get into a fight."
"We dont' need to be seperated!" Jacky Protests!
"ANYWAY, AS I WAS SAYING" I say rudely. "Don't think I will except you as a member, you can stay for now, But I'm watching you" I put my fingers near my eyes and point at her giving Celsete the 'I'm-watching-you' glance.

Will Avery get along with Celeste? Will They find a way out of the castle grounds? Will celeste join the dark side once again?

part 16
i look over at avery as she's babbling on. wow she can be annoying, i thinks. so i step forward and push her out the window too.
"AAAAAUUUUUGH!!!!" she shrieks as she slides to the bottom.
"ok everyone out we go" i say and jump out the window too.
i dont scream, of course, cause i'm SO much braver then the rest of them. (XD ok guys i'm catching on at my bossiness) so we are at the castle grounds and i look around. there is a huge army of guards standing around the castle! oh no! they must have heard that princess meli has escaped! what are we supposed to do? of course all of my group are still oblivious of this and talking among themselves so i pull them all behind a bush with me.
"shut it!" i whisper
"wont you stop trying to be the leader jacky?" shelly whines
"i said SHUT UP!" i shout.
uh oh...that was a bad idea. i peek up over the bush and realize that our little argument has caught some of the guards attention. and now their walking towards us!

will we EVER be safe? or are we having too much fun to end this story? tune in next time and find out!!!!!!!! woo!

~jacky

"Way to go!" I say, with anger bubbling inside of me. "You might of well said 'Hey gaurds! Princess Meli is over here!'" I run off. The gaurds see me. "I have to get the princess from the tower" I say, trying to get the gaurds to think we havent gotton them yet. "I DON'T KNOW WHERE SHE IS, MAYBE I SHOULD LOOK FOR HER IN THE CASTLE" I shout trying to catch the gaurds attention. This was their cue. The other girls have to come out and attack the gaurds chasing me. Now! Now? NOW!? Where are they? Come out. I can't hold these gaurds forever. I turn back Oh-so-swiftly, and relize they arnt at the bush. How could they ditch me like that? This is all Celestes plan. I knew it!
Unknowing of what to do, I jump into the moat surronding the castle and use my special swimmer skills to loose the gaurds. Haha! I think in triumph. Wait, this isnt water! It's Ucky goo! Noo! The gaurds have caught up now. And when I think I'm doomed for sure, All of a sudden the gaurds fall down! I see Shelly And Meli with shovels in their hands knocking out gaurds! "
Yes!" I cry in releif. "I thought you guys left me!"
"We were just trying to get the gaurds at the right molment" Shelly said while puling me out of the goo.

Were will the go from now? Will Avery ever be recognized by Jacky for the most wonder awsome person she is?


part 17

"come on weirdo lets go bac to the meli's castle" i say to avery
now all of us r here..jacky,avery,shelly,meli...and wheres celeste...?
"hey guys wheres celeste?" i ask
"who gives a flying balogna where she is!" screams avery
"but she help us and who knows maybe she was actually trying to help us..." says i making a point
"well i still dont care we gotta get the he...wooo mamma jamma llama..WAT IS THAT!!!?" SCREAMS AVERY AT THE 20 FOOT TALL MONSTER
"OMG WE WE BETTER START RUNNING NOW AND FAST" JACKY YELLS


will the 4 make it bac in time at meli's castle....? bom bom BOM!!!

Part 18
"RUN!" I yell. We all hustle over and hide behind a statue. The monster sees us and yanks the statue out of the ground. There is no where to run.
"HALT!" Meli shouts. Suprisingly, the monster did what it was told. "Show yourself!" Meli shouts again. "At once!" The monster starts 'eroding' and crumbles into a figure below.
"No! It can't be!" Jacky shouts. "I trusted you, CELESTE!"
"I TOLD YOU SO!" I shout. "I told you she was bad."
"How did you know it was celeste?" Shelly asks meli.
"I didnt, but I knew that their orders were not to hurt me." She said matter-o-factly.
"But WHY CELESTE!?" Jacky screams. "I thought you were with me to kill Avery. Now you can't help me kill her"
"Oh really?" She said as she transformed back into the monster, and grabbed me just about to eat me...

Will Avery be saved?

part 19
"wait celeste! dont do it!" i say suddenly frightened.
i didnt think she was really THAT willing to kill avery, but apparently i was wrong.
"why not?" celeste says.
"because i'm a better leader than jacky and she's finally realized that" avery says smugly.
"no your not!!!!" i yell at her
"admit it!"she says back
" i'm not going to admit to something thats NOT TRUE!" i say
"your in denial." avery says looking proud of herself.
i let out a low vampirish growl. one little snap of the neck and-
my thoughts are interuppted by shelly.
"you guys quit fighting!" she yells.
"would you like me to kill her or not?" celeste asks politely.
"ugh.....as much as i hate to say it, no i would not like you to do that, she is my friend after all." i mumble.
so celeste shrinks back into person form. and we continue running. me glaring at avery the whole way

will we EVER make it back? this is getting hopeless. stay tuned.

and avery you better be glad your not dead. i was considering killing you. it was VERY tempting.
vampire instincts kicking in,
jacky

part 21

as we run to meli's house we have to go through the woods
"ok jacky u kno the way in here..so u lead" says meli
"omg but its soo many bugs and mud and other disgusting stuff in there.." shelly says
"wat other disgusting stuff...." asks avery mockingly
"well..there's u ..." snaps shelly
"u little son of a..."
"hey over here.....there's a path"says jacky knowingly
"ok i give up lets go" says shelly
as we all go in the woods following the path behind jacky
"jacky wats wrong..u stopped"shelly asks jacky
"umm..well.. this is weird the woods arnt this long..." says jacky
"well..maybe u just got mixed up and made the wrong turn.." avery says
"yea maybe it was that..lets goo this wa...wats that over there in the shadow?" jacky whispers
"well..well..well...u thought u could just take princess meli away from me...well too bad cause now i want her back.." says joey the evil king
we cant go anywhere else we r trapped like fish in a barrel..and now...omg....he has a....
BANG BANG BANG
OMG hes shotting at us....
"aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh"we all scream and split in the woods like monkeys


will they all survive in the woods with joey shotting at them....

part 22
i run blindly through the woods trying to find a spot to be safe. i can still hear the gunshots ringing in the back ground. what kind of creep is this? bringing a GUN to the woods! he's gone mad! as i look ahead i recognize the small bridge. the bridge is very small, and it goes over a bunch of little rocks, theres no water there or anything. so i jump down off the bridge and crawl under it. ok. no one can find me here i think calmly to myself. now what could have happened to the others? they cant run as fast as me, what if they get caught? what am i supposed to do all on my own? my thoughts are interrupted once again by footsteps. someone is crossing over the bridge. i peek up through the bottom and realize its shelly looking terrified as ever. and so to get her attention, i thump against the bridge with my fist.
"OH my god! what was that?" she whispers looking terrified.
"your worst nightmare" i say giggling.
"you freak!" she says looking down at me. "this is no time for games! they're going to get killed!" she whispers.
"get down here already before he finds us! " i whisper harshly.
she does as she was told, but not without complaining.
"on the GROUND? theres mud down here! i'm going to get my pretty dress all ruined!" she says looking disappointed.
"will you EVER shut up?" i ask getting angry.
our conversation is interrupted by more screams around the woods. what could be happening to them?

how are the other hero's faring? find out in the next episode of ANIME PRINCESS!!!!!!
your amused friend,
jacky


part 23

i couldnt just wait here under the bridge and listen to my friends scream
soo we had to do something
"jacky u stay here and get any girls that run by the bridge i'll go look for the others" i tell jacky
"k then" she replies
as i go off into the woods i see meli fighting off joey....wow she is awesome at her ninja moves
first she does a back flip and kicks joey in the face..then she runs and jumps and puts one foot in front of the other for a ninja kick
and kicks in in the stomach..oohh wait there's avery running towards the bridge..and she just seen jacky and now they r both under the bridge hiding
i go in between the fight of joey and meli and try to get joey outta here....but hes too strong..he sees me from the corner of his eyes and back hands me across the face i fall to the ground..
now im mad and push him to a tree and kick him in the back as im doin this meli runs off and im quick behind her..but we werent fast enough...
we see jacky and avery starting to run outta the woods wen we hear a final gun shot and it hits me in the bac....
i drop to the ground screaming
"omg shelly..noo..." screams jacky
"guys pick her up"says meli
"we gotta get her to a safe pla..."
thats all i hear now its all dark

part 24
"shelly! NO! dont leave me! please! please come back!!" i am completely devastated.
"DANG YOU JOEY!" i shout at him! (i had some other word choice but i decided to keep this at a PG level)
i run at him as fast as i can and grab the gun from his hand. he is in shock by my great speed and it takes him to realize that his gun is in MY very capable hands now. i point it at him.
"you wouldnt" he sneers.
"never trust a pirate." i reply back.
he's starting to look nervous. i hold the gun steady. i notice meli carrying shelly away trying to escape the woods. and there's something else i notice. standing behind joey, is avery. she has a rock in her hand. and CRACK she knocks him out.
i breathe a sigh of relief. i would never have been able to pull that trigger, he was right.
"lets get out of here" i say. and avery nods. we run after meli and shelly. celeste follows too.

will shelly be alright???? is it going to be a happy ending? the suspense is KILLING YOU!!!!

once again, quite proud of myself,
jacky

part 25

now all is well we r bac in melis tower
and all the girls r by my bed side in the castle hospital
"hello sleppy head..how was heaven" says jacky with a giggle
"it was lovely...ooww " i yelp i feel the pain again
"oohh u feel the pain in ur bac" says avery
i nod..im on my stomach soo thats there is no pressure upon my bac
"well...theres good news and bad.. which one first?" meli asks me
"the good" i say still in pain
"well joey is in the hospital but once hes awaken its the dungeon for him" says meli
"and the bad is.....aww avery u tell her" she says sadly
"umm well..." says ave
"well come on say already..i can handle it..." i say worridly
"well..the doctor says its a 92 percent chance that u can be paralyzed from the waist down...because of where the bullet hit u in ur back" says avery slowly
i close my eyes not believeing this at all..i start to cry...
"y me?" i ask god.."y?"
now im bawling and they all come gather round me to confront me...
"but there is still a chance i might not be paralyzed right?' i say
"yea but not a big chance...not at all" says jacky

will shelly be able to walk again.........

part 26
We all got home alright, back to what is princess meli's castle. I can't believe i left my post at my bosses castle were i have been working for some years now. I guess i need a better will, and not let people boss me around any more. I worked for my boss for so long, not even knowing what "the marshmellow flies at night" means. I almost killed that avery girl, by DIGESTION, just because that other jacky girl told me to. I am not a beast.
and then shelly got shot, and the medical doctor says she may be paralized from waist down.
I walk into the bedroom where the girls are, and shelly is on her bed, after obviously just hearing the bad news.
"Ohhh i am soo devastated rught now!" she wails.
"It's not for certain." avery tries to say
"It'll be alright." says jacky
"We'll still love you if you can't drive us everywhere anymore." says the princess.
"Ohhh i want to be able to walk!!" wails shelly shaking on her bed. I come a lay a tray with hot towels on the table beside her.
"Walk?" i say, "we ladies i do hope you know that even if shelly is paralized, she'll be able to walk."
"!" they look at me in disbelief. "
"Well, certainly, i have an uncle, at least i think i did, who was paralized too. He walks, and even drives, ...but i'm not so sire THAT'S so safe."
Shelly looks happy for one moment. Then there is a banging on the door. A maid bursts in a screechs joyfully.
"Oh princess meli! I just am so thankful to see you back and well!"
"Yeah, thanks." she replies. and the maid leaves, blustering with happieness, "I must tell the others!"
"Oh! would you mind keeping it quiet for now?" i interupt her happieness.
"What? why?"
""because the men who captured meli in the first place, will no doubt be searching for her. I'm quite sure that they'll stop at nothing to find her agian. I don't know why of 'couse. though.. nevermind." I try tjo explain wihtout saying that i once worked as evil.
"Oh no!" says jacky, "I just can't let them have her.
"Of course not Jacky." says Avery "THat's why i purpose that we go to the captors castle again, and FIND UP WHAT THEY ARE UP TO!"
*gasp!*

how in the world could anyone think of going back again?! is meli still in danger?! what IS "the marshmellow flie by midnight?!"






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Cynthiasideways
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 07, 2008 @ 11:54pm
wow, all on one page, i'll hafta reread it sometime!


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 09, 2008 @ 10:51pm
lol yeahi know. i think i'm going to print it out eventually



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Meowh
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 11:56pm
Haha!
The WHOLE THING!
Put the second one up soon!


commentCommented on: Fri Apr 11, 2008 @ 10:01pm
i will when its finished! ^.^



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BlackRain000
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commentCommented on: Sat Apr 12, 2008 @ 05:34pm
I stoped at part 8, its 2 much


Love random comments
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commentCommented on: Sat Apr 12, 2008 @ 07:30pm
lol. it is quite a lot. but this is DAYS of work so dont feel rushed in reading it all. whenever your bored you can just read another chapter. lol



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