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yeah....well i dont know.
okay well i kinda wrote a song/poem...actually im not sure really but it has a refrain so i guess it's a song lol anyway i wrote this about my first real love that crushed my hear sooo...here it goes...
(I wrote this last night aka: march 31st. or maybe april 01? idk lol)

*Verse 1:
We met through my sister, Katie
I was fourteen goin on crazy
with each word and each day our friendship grew
I lost myself and became someone new...

*Refrain:
rages through my heart
I look into your eyes
The darkness drifts apart
From my blackened cold skies

*Verse 2:
I did things that lost me my pride
But he's my friend, he's on my side
He takes my problems away anytime
Now he's in my heart and in my mind

*Refrain:
rages through my heart
I look into your eyes
The darkness drifts apart
From my blackened cold skies

*Verse 3:
I offer him my fragile heart
He refuses my love then moves away
Our friendship starts to fall apart
He has met a girl and he's gonna stay

*Refrain:
Crying through my heart
thoughts of him race through my mind...
darkness will never part
though I know I'm wasting time






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Concrow
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 02, 2008 @ 09:09pm
*Claps* That was good, really good. I can actully picture the song really well I might add.


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commentCommented on: Fri Apr 11, 2008 @ 01:23am
wow nyce XD



THEDEVIANTONE
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LadyMorganaPendragon
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commentCommented on: Sun Apr 20, 2008 @ 02:39am
thats a very good song. 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh


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