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forever broken Dark within. From the darkness, shall we crawl From broken hearts, one and all Crying out in sheer despair The souls of the lost Final breaths frozen in air Like beautiful roses glazed with frost Once sealed away by a loving light Horrific pain, eternal plight Within me, anguish and rage Once sent away But in a single day revived by those horrid words on that accursed page. A life shattered at once A life no one wants So shall I live in pain Ne'er to feel love again Lost and alone, forced by no sin So shall I be the darkness within.

Posted by: Summoned Shadows Sun Dec 30, 2007 @ 03:27am

Somewhere in time I will find you and haunt you again
Like the wind sweeps the earth
Somewhere in time when no virtues are left to defend
You've fallen deep
- Kamelot

I love you, Orrie-Chan heart

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Kitrina Marcus
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Commented on: Sun Dec 30, 2007 @ 03:35am


	Wow... While dark, that's incredibly beautiful.

Commented on: Sun Dec 30, 2007 @ 03:38am


	Yeah.. Thanks. I usually write like that.. sweatdrop

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Commented on: Sun Dec 30, 2007 @ 03:43am


	Hey, it's really good. If dark is what you write, stick to it. You're very good.

Commented on: Sun Dec 30, 2007 @ 03:45am


	Thanks. I'm looking for a publishing company at the moment... I had been told by a lot of people that I am to be the next Edgar Allen Poe

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Commented on: Sun Dec 30, 2007 @ 07:44am


	I can see that very easily being the case.

Commented on: Mon Jan 21, 2008 @ 08:17pm


	It's really good. I don't think I could write as good as you.

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