excerpt from takoshi's story in progress of writting..
prolouge-forgive me father
knock knock.slide.
hello my son how may i serve you tonight
forgive me father for i have sinned.
and how is it you haved sin my son?
I have taken the life of an innocent.
did you know this person?
you could hear the rustling of the ministers robes on the other side of the confessional.
yes i did father.
In what way?
we where to be wed earlyer today.
You know i must let the athoritys know my son correct?
The minister looked throught the hole and saw nothing.
A man was running out the front of the church for a motorcycle.
One day i hope to go to jail for what ive done but not yet.
As he pulls away sirens of police cars are heard in the distance.
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